· Rubadiri’s poem captures the looming arrival of a fierce
storm. The anticipation of its arrival is both exciting and frightening. The wind is described as a mighty force, unpredictable in its direction, and carrying with it ominous clouds. The strength of the wind seems to suggest that worse is to follow once the storm hits. LINES 1 - 4
The storm seems to originate from the West.
May have implications for colonial occupation. The storm is erratic and creates confusion. Lines 5 - 8
The storm is compared to a plague of locusts
bringing destruction under the guise of something positive. The comparison to a madman also creates the sense of erratic, disturbing and unpredictable behaviour. Lines 9 - 12
The dark clouds provide the expectation of
something It should bring something welcoming (rain/water) But, these clouds are sinister like some evil creature bringing something evil/negative.. Lines 13 - 14
The intensity of the storm increases
It appears as if nature itself has submitted to the power of the storm. Bowing to let it pass. Lines 15 - 18
The children scream in delight at the storm as the
storm intensifies some more More confusion created mixed with panic. Lines 19 - 25
The vulnerability of the inhabitants becomes clear
The babies are exposed to the storm and Once again the environments submission to the storm is revealed. Lines 26 - 28
The clothes , the protection against the elements are
tattered and useless against the power of the storm. The nakedness of the woman reveal how vulnerable they are. Lines 29 - 32
The intense sound of the storrn is now apparent.
The rumble, trmble, crack could also describe cannon fire, gun fire, etc. The word ‘march’ suggests an incursion of some powerful force that wreaks havoc on an indigenous land.