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Sharma, R-Article 2
Sharma, R-Article 2
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First Author’s Name: Flavia Fayet-Moore PhD, APD, Andrew McConnell BSc
(AdvMaths), Kate Tuck BAppSci (Biophysics), Peter Petocz PhD, Tim Cassettari Bsc
(Hons), APD, Hania Rahimi-Ardabili PhD, Michelle Blumfield PhD, APD, Skye Marshall
PhD, APD
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1. Introduction
Children and teenagers are getting sick mostly due to their diets from all over the world,
including Australia. Diseases like type-2 diabetes and high blood pressure are becoming
common, and they can affect the growth and health in a long run.
2. Rationale
Australia has guidelines on what kids should eat to stay healthy. These guidelines try to
tackle the rising problems and say kids should eat lots of foods like veggies, fruits and
should avoid junk food that are high in sugar and fat. Even with these guidelines, many
Aussie kids are still eating too much junk foods.
3. Aim
This study is conducted with the aim of figuring out the effects of unhealthy foods that are
consumed by Aussie kids. To understand why the huge number of unhealthy foods are
being consumed and what can be done to help them eat better. After analysing the foods
they are eating at different times, we hope to find a solution that might lead to uplift
healthier eating habits and keep kids healthy.
4. Study design
Cross-sectional studies are like taking a picture of a moment in time. They are great for
getting a quick snapshot of what is happening in a population and finding out how
common certain things are. But they cannot tell us why things are happening or how they
might change over time. Sometimes people might not remember things accurately, which
can affect the results. So, while they are handy for getting a general idea, they have their
limitations.
5. Methods
6. Results
The study explored into the eating habits of over 12,000 Aussie kids/teens, were nearly
everyone enjoyed discretionary treats, were 74% went beyond the recommended limits.
Those extra snacks/treats were like little push of energy for them. Cakes, biscuits, pastries,
potatoes, and ice cream are the main culprits. Snack time, lunch, dinner, and morning tea
came to be the common time for eating these goods. Older kids, aged 9–18 years, were
more likely to rely on discretionary foods. Surprisingly, factors like gender, social status,
or body mass index did not affect this eating trend. Moreover, people having these foods
were doubling their enjoyment compared to those who were more reserved in their eating
habits.
7. Reflection
The study examines the dietary habits of Australian children and teenagers, considering
factors like age, gender, and lifestyle. By analysing their snack choices, the findings offer
valuable awareness into promoting healthier eating. However, relying on data from a single
day and an older timeframe may not fully capture long-term habits. Gathering more recent
data would provide a clearer picture of any changes over time.
The findings largely align with the understanding that discretionary foods and beverages
contribute significantly to daily energy intake, mainly among children/teenagers. The
identification of specific types of discretionary foods and their consumption patterns
supports previous research in this area.
The findings of this study also show what we have observed in other research, illustrating
the widespread consumption of discretionary foods among youth and its impact on overall
diet quality.
The author’s conclusions regarding the need for broad public health strategies and
interventions to address the diet quality of Australian children/adolescents are reasonable.
The study highlights the critical moments of dietary weakness and promoting steps for
healthier food choices within schools and communities.
This study supports the importance of eating and reducing the consumption of
discretionary foods and beverages, not only among children/adolescents but also for
individuals of all ages. It highlights the role of education and environmental interventions