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Ex 2:
1. The percentage of students attending university rose gradually from 50% in 2005 to
70% in 2015.
- There was a steady rise from 50% in 2005 to 70% in 2015 in the percentage of
students attending university.
- The proportion of students attending university experienced a steady growth by
20% (from 50% in 2005 to 70% in 2015).
- A leisurely increase from 50% in 2005 to 70% in 2015 was seen in the percentage
of students attending university.
- The period between 2005 and 2015 witnessed a gentle increase by 20% (from 50%
to 70%) in the percentage of students attending university.
2. The amount of electricity consumed in the country increased steadily over the 20-year
period, peaking at 1500 kWh in 2020.
- There was a steady rise in the amount of electricity consumed in the country
from 2000 to 2020, reaching the highest point of 1599 kWh in 2020.
- A gradual increase was seen in the amount of electricity consumed in the country
over the 20-year period, peaking at 1500 kWh in 2020.
- The percentage of electricity consumed in the country witnessed a poky growth
from 2000 to 2020, reaching a peak of 1500 kWh in 2020.
- The 20-year period saw a gradual increase in the proportion of electricity
consumed in the country, hitting the highest point of 1500 kWh in 2020.
3. Between 1995 and 2010, the number of people using public transportation declined
slowly, falling from 60% to 45%.
- The period between 1995 and 2010 saw a steady reduction in the number of people
using public transportation, from 60% to 45%.
- The percentage of people using public transportation experienced a gradual decline
over the 15-year period, from 60% in 1995 to 45% in 2010.
- There was a slow fall from 60% to 45% in the percentage of people using public
transportation between 1995 and 2010.
- The rate of people using public transportation saw a leisurely decrease to 15%, from
60% in 1995 to 45% in 2010.
4. In 2000, the production of wheat was approximately 500 tonnes. It grew gradually
over the next decade to peak at 750 tonnes before decreasing to 600 tonnes in 2020.
 - Before decreasing to 600 tonnes in 2020, the production of wheat experienced a
steady growth from 500 tonnes in 2000 to 750 tonnes over the next decade.
- The 10-year period saw a leisurely increase in the production of wheat, standing
at 500 tonnes in 2000 and peaking at 750 tonnes over the next decade, before
decreasing to 600 tonnes in 2020.
- A slow rise from 500 tonnes in 2000 to a peak of 750 tonnes in 2010 was seen in
the production of wheat, before decreasing to 600 tonnes in 2020.
- In 2000, wheat production was around 500 tonnes, it peaked at 750 tonnes in
2010. By 2020, production decreased to 600 tonnes.
5. The rate of internet penetration climbed steadily over the 15-year period, starting at
20% in 2000 and reaching 80% in 2015. (bạn có thể phân tích ngữ pháp câu này chứ?)
Phân tích ngữ pháp:
- Start at+số liệu: bắt đầu tại mức
- Reach+số liệu: đạt đến mức
- Chủ ngữ chính: The rate of internet penetration
- Động từ chính: climbed+Trạng từ: steadily
Rewrite:
- The period between 2000 and 2015 saw a gradual increase from 20% to 80% in
the percentage of internet penetration.
- A slow increase by 60% was seen in the percentage of internet penetration, from
20% in 2000 to 80% in 2015.
- The 15-year period saw a gentle rise in internet penetration, starting at 20% in
2000 and reaching 80% in 2015.
- There was a steady increase from 20% in 2000 to 80% in 2015 in the rate of
internet penetration
6. The biggest change was seen in the employment rate, which rose steadily over the 25-
year period to around 95% in 2020.
- There was a gradual rise in the employment rate over the 25-year period,
reaching approximately 95% in 2020.
- The rate of employment increased gradually over the 25-year period, reaching
around 95% in 2020.
- The 25-year period saw a steady growth, reaching around 95% in 2020 in the
employment rate.
 - A gentle rise was seen in the employment percentage over the 25-year period,
achieving around 95% in 2020.
7. In 1990, the volume of water consumption was about 200 million liters. It increased
gradually over the next 15 years to approximately 300 million liters before stabilizing.
- The period between 1990 and 2005 saw a gentle increase from 200 million liters to
around 300 million liters before stabilizing.
- The volume of water consumption rose steadily over a 15-year period, beginning
at 200 million liters and reaching approximately 300 million liters in 2005 before
stabilizing.
- A slow growth was seen in the volume of water consumption, from 200 million
liters in 1990 to about 300 million liters in 2005 before stabilizing.
- The volume of water consumption rose gradually by 100 million liters, from 200
million liters in 1990 to about 300 million liters in 2005 before stabilizing.
8. The number of smartphones sold rose significantly over the period from 2010 to 2020,
from 50 million to 300 million units.
- There was a substantial increase from 50 million in 2010 to 300 million units in
2020 in the number of smartphones sold.
- The number of smartphones sold experienced an enormous increase of 250
million units over a 10-year period, peaking at 300 million units in 2020.
- A dramatic rise from 50 million in 2010 to 300 million units in 2020 was seen in
the number of smartphones sold.
- In 2010, the number of smartphones sold was 50 million units. It grew
significantly over the next decade, peaking at 300 million units.
9. The proportion of people owning their homes fell gradually from 70% in 1990 to 55%
in 2010.
- There was a steady decrease from 70% in 1990 to 55% in 2010 in the proportion of
people owning their homes.
- A leisurely reduction by 55% in the proportion of people owning their homes
over 20-year period, from 70% to 55% in 2010.
- The percentage of people owning their homes experienced a gentle decline from
70% in 1990 to 55% in 2010.
- The period between 1990 and 2010 saw a slow fall from 70% to 55% in the
proportion of people owning their homes.
10. In 2005, the amount of plastic waste generated was roughly 100 tonnes. It rose
steadily to reach 150 tonnes in 2015 dropping to 120 tonnes in 2020.
- The period between 2005 and 2015 saw a steady increase from 100 tonnes to 150
tonnes. However, in 2020 there was a decrease to 120 tonnes in the amount of
plastic waste generated.
- A gradual increase was seen in the amount of plastic waste generated over 10-
year period, rising from 100 tonnes to 150 tonnes before falling to 120 tonnes in
2020.
- The amount of plastic waste generated experienced a gentle rise from 100 tonnes
in 2005 to 150 tonnes in 2015 before reducing to 120 tonnes in 2020.
- There was a leisurely growth in the amount of plastic waste generated over 10-
year period, from 100 tonnes to 150 tonnes in 2015 before falling to 120 tonnes in
2020.
11. The number of visitors to the national park increased steadily from 200,000 in 2000
to 350,000 in 2010.
- The number of visitors to the national park witnessed a gradual increase from
200,000 in 2000 to 350,000 in 2010.
- A leisurely growth was seen in the number of visitors to the national park, rising
from 200,000 in 2000 to 350,000 over the next decade.
- There was a slow rise in the number of visitors to the national park over 10-year
period, from 200,000 to 350,000 in 2010.
- The period between 2000 and 2010 saw a gentle increase from 200,000 to 350,000
in the number of visitors to the national park.
12. The volume of exports rose gradually over the 15-year period, peaking at $500
million in 2020.
- There was a steady rise in the volume of exports over the 15-year period,
reaching the highest point of $500 million in 2020.
- A gentle increase was seen in the volume of exports over the 15-year period
before increasing to $500 million in 2020.
- The volume of exports experienced a leisurely growth over the 15-year period
before peaking at $500 million in 2020.
- The 15-year period saw a gradual rise in the volume of exports, peaking at $500
million in 2020.
13. From 1990 to 2010, the percentage of people working from home increased slowly,
rising from 10% to 30%.
- There was a gradual growth in the percentage of people working from home
from 10% in 1990 to 30% in 2010.
- The percentage of people working experienced a steady rise over the two
decades, from 10% to 20% in 2010.
- A gentle increase was seen in the percentage of people working from home over
20-year period, from 10% to 20% in 2010.
- The period between 1990 and 2010 saw a leisurely rise from 10% to 20% in the
rate of people working from home.
14. In 2005, the average temperature was around 15°C. It increased gradually over the
next 20 years to reach 17°C in 2025.
- The period between 2005 and 2025 saw a steady rise approximately from 15°C to
17°C in the average temperature.
- A gradual increase was seen in the average temperature over 20-year period,
from about 15°C to 17°C in 2025.
- The average temperature experienced a leisurely rise over the two decades, from
approximately 15°C to 17°C in 2025.
- There was a gradual growth of 2°C in the average temperature, from 15°C in
2005 to 17°C over the next 20 years .
15. The number of books sold rose steadily over the decade, climbing from 1 million in
2010 to 2.5 million in 2020.
- The period between 2010 and 2020 saw a steady rise from 1 million to 2.5 million
in the number of books sold.
- A gradual increase was seen in the number of books sold over 10-year period,
from about 1 million to 2.5 million in 2020.
- The number of books sold witnessed a leisurely rise over the decades, from
approximately 1 million to 2.5 million in 2020.
- There was a gradual growth of 1.5 million in the number of books sold, from 1
million in 2010 to 2.5 million over the next 10 years .
16. The biggest change was observed in the level of carbon emissions, which fell
steadily over the 25-year period to around 200 million tonnes in 2025.
- The period between 2000 and 2025 saw a steady rise to 200 million tonnes in the
level of carbon emissions.
 - A gradual increase was seen in the level of carbon emissions over 25-year period,
decreasing to 200 million tonnes in 2025.
- The level of carbon emissions experienced a leisurely rise over the 25-year
period, fall to 200 million tonnes in 2025.
- There was a gradual growth of tonnes in the level of carbon emissions over the
25-year period to around 200 million tonnes in 2025.
17. The number of electric cars, which had been steadily increasing since their
introduction in 2010, surged dramatically between 2015 and 2020, reaching a peak of 2
million vehicles. (bạn có thể phân tích cấu trúc ngữ pháp câu này chứ?)
Phân tích ngữ pháp:
- Chủ ngữ chính: The number of electric cars
- Động từ chính: surged ( past simple tense)
- Mệnh đề tính ngữ: which had been steadily increasing since their introduction
in 2010
Rewrite
- The number of electric cars experienced a steady increase since their introduction
in 2010 before surging enormously between 2015 and 2020, peaking at 2 million
vehicles.
- There was a gradual growth in the number of electric cars since their
introduction in 2010, then this number rose significantly between 2015 and 2020,
reaching the highest point at 2 million vehicles.
- A leisurely rise was seen in the number of electric cars thanks to their
introduction in 2010, before it increased sharply between 2015 and 2020, reaching
at 2 million vehicles.
- The year 2010 saw a gentle increase in the number of electric cars since their
introduction in 2010 before surging enormously between 2015 and 2020, peaking
at 2 million vehicles.
18. Although the percentage of smokers declined gradually over the 20-year period, it
was observed that the most significant decrease occurred between 2005 and 2010, when
various anti-smoking laws were implemented. (bạn có thể phân tích cấu trúc ngữ pháp
câu này chứ?)
Phân tích ngữ pháp
- Cấu trúc: Although+S1+V1, S2+V2
- Chủ ngữ chính: it
 - Động từ chính: was observed
- Mệnh đề danh ngữ: when various anti-smoking laws were implemented
Rewrite:
- Although the percentage of smokers declined gradually over the 20-year period,
there was a considerable decline from 2005 to 2010, when various anti-smoking
laws were implemented.
- The percentage of smokers experienced a steady fall over the 20-year period but
this figure reduced sharply from 2005 to 2010, when various anti-smoking laws
were implemented.
- When various anti-smoking laws were implemented, a dramatic decrease from
2005 to 2010 was seen in the rate of smokers, although this rate declined
gradually over the 20-year period.
- Although the 20-year period saw a gentle reduction, the year between 2005 and
2010 had a substantial decline in the percentage of smokers, when various anti-
smoking laws were implemented.
19. The amount of solar energy produced in the country, which had been negligible
before 2000, increased rapidly over the next two decades, especially after government
subsidies were introduced in 2010, resulting in a total output of 500 megawatts by 2020.
(bạn có thể phân tích cấu trúc ngữ pháp câu này chứ?)
Phân tích ngữ pháp:
- Chủ ngữ chính: The amount of solar energy produced in the country
- Mệnh đề tính ngữ: which had been negligible before 2000
- Động từ chính: increased+Trạng từ: rapidly
Rewrite:
- There was a significant increase in the amount of solar energy produced in the
country from 2000 to over the next two decades, especially after government
subsidies were introduced in 2010, standing at a total output of 500 megawatts
by 2020.
- The amount of solar energy produced in the country experienced a considerable
rise from 2000 to over the next two decades, especially the introduction of
government subsidies in 2010, peaking at a total output of 500 megawatts by
2020.
 - An enormous growth was seen in the amount of solar energy produced in the
country, mainly the introduction of government subsidies in 2010, peaking at a
total output of 500 megawatts by 2020.
- The 20-year period saw a sharp increase in the amount of solar energy produced
in the country, thanks to the introduction of government subsidies in 2010,
reaching a total output of 500 megawatts by 2020.
20. In 1995, the number of bicycles produced was approximately 10,000 units. It
increased steadily over the next 10 years to reach 15,000 units before declining slightly
to 13,000 units in 2010.
- There was a steady increase in the number of bicycles produced over 10-year
period, rising from 10,000 units to 15,000 units in 2005 before falling marginally
to 13,000 units in 2010.
- The number of bicycles produced experienced a gentle rise from 10,000 units in
1995 to 15,000 units over the next decade, then this number reduced faintly to
13,000 units in 2010.
- A leisurely growth was seen in the number of bicycles produced over 10-year
period, from 10,000 units to 15,000 units in 2005. However, this number fell
marginally to 13,000 units in 2010.
- The period between 1995 and 2005 saw a gradual increase in the number of
bicycles produced, from 10,000 units to 15,000 units before declining slightly to
13,000 units in 2010.