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TeixeiraSofia_Essay2
TeixeiraSofia_Essay2
Childhood trauma can have effects on adult life in terms of mental health, behavior issues, and
physical health. An abuse from close relatives, a bullying suffered in school, or even an accident are
some of the examples for childhood trauma. However, what really defines it as a trauma is its impact
and consequences onto someone's life; what for some may be nothing, for others can be a lifetime of
suffering.
experience during early years of life that have last longing impacts into the future. With that in mind,
it's relevant to also consider what these future impacts may be. A great example to evidentiate those is
a longitudinal study conducted by Adverse Childhood Experiences (ACE) which explored the
long-lasting impact of childhood trauma into adulthood, including over 17,000 participants ranging in
age from 19 to 90. Its results demonstrated the relation between the childhood trauma exposure, and
high-risk behaviors consequences (for example smoking, unprotected sex, drug use, ect), as well as
phisicaly health consequences (such as chronic illness, heart disease and cancer). Even though some
may wrongly argue using comments such as "they were so young when that happened, they won’t
even remember it as an adult," studies such as this ACE, and even someones' own or a close one's
diabetes, and even stroke. Additionally, in terms of mental health the impacts can include: anger
control issues, emotional distress, high levels of stress, as well as post-traumatic stress disorder
(PTSD). A research published in Psychiatric Times evidenciated that the prevalence of suicide
attempts is significantly higher in adults who experienced somekind of traumas as a child compered
to those who didn't. Also, considering the behavior consequences, there can be: experiencing more
ability to plan ahead or prepare for the future, and low self-esteem. Moreover, in some cases
childhood trauma can extend beyond the mentioned physical, mental health and behavior
consequences. Some studies, such as one from The National Child Traumatic Stress Network, have
proved that those who experience trauma in childhood have a higher risk of becoming a criminal
offender, possibly committing serious and violent offenses. Taking that into account, it's clear that
trauma experienced in childhood can have lasting effects up to adult years in several different aspects
of life.
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In the book born a crime for instance, Trevor Noah ,the author, shares many of his childhood
stories, for example the one in which his mother made him jump from the still moving minivan. As
described by himself "My mother reached over, pulled the sliding door open, grabbed me, and threw
me out as far as she could" (Noah, 2016, 19p.). Despite being a harsh and remarkable moment, Noah
found in humor a way to cope with his emotions. Right following he includes his comedy "Mom said
“run,” and I ran. Like the gazelle runs from the lion, I ran." (Noah, 2016, 19p.). Throughout his book
he speaks very openly about it, as he does with his comedy show and interviews as well. Noah shares
his history and passes his message in a more relaxed form, even with serious issues. Nonetheless,
that's not a rule for everyone. Some people spend a lifetime suffering for an issue that happened in
childhood and never find a way to truly cope with it. For Trevor, he learned how to deal with his
traumas and understand, as well as professional psychological support. More than that, even coping
with the issues, doesn't mean Trevor, or anyone who experiences childhood trauma will be free of it,
it can potentially be a trigger; what can be done is learn how to deal with it. The author for instance
shared a recent experience of his mental health issue, "It was terrible. Are you kidding me?" (Noah,
2021), still, once again he found an alternative to deal with it, this time mainly by adjusting his
routine "Two of the best things for depression are routine and goal-oriented tasks." (Noah, 2021).
To conclude, childhood traumas can affect adults' behavior, mental and physical health.
Avoiding childhood trauma is not an alternative, once in yearly ages people don't have the maturity
for so neither have the independence/autonomy, besides some if not most situations are
uncontrollable. Therefore, childhood traumas end up happening for many people and consequently
having those last longing impacts on adulthood. Nonetheless, with proper treatment and support those
consequences can be minimized and learned how to deal/cope with, as happened for Trevor Noah.
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References
Amy Morin, L. C. S. W. (n.d.). Alleviating childhood trauma. Verywell Mind. Retrieved April
Bartlett, J. D., & Steber, K. (2019, May 9). How to implement trauma-informed care to build
resilience to childhood trauma. Child Trends. Retrieved April 16, 2022, from
https://www.childtrends.org/publications/how-to-implement-trauma-informed-care-to-
build-resilience-to-childhood-trauma
Browne, C., & Winkelman, C. (2007). The Effect of Childhood Trauma on Later
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children and youth. Washington, DC: U.S. Department of Health and Human Services,
Children’s Bureau.
Fox B, Perez N, Cass E, Baglivio M, Epps N. Trauma changes everything: Examining the
relationship between adverse childhood experiences and serious, violent and chronic
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Horwitz, A. V., Widom, C. S., McLaughlin, J., & White, H. R. (2001). The Impact of
Childhood Abuse and Neglect on Adult Mental Health: A Prospective Study. Journal
Laurie Garo, Ayana Allen-Handy, & Chance W. Lewis. (2018). <em>Race, Poverty, and
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Noah, T. (2016). Born a crime: Stories from a South African Childhood. Cornelsen.
Zeeman, K. (2021, June 21). Trevor Noah on depression and being a workaholic. TimesLIVE.
CRAAP Test
for Evaluating Sources SCORE CARD
Use the questions below to help you evaluate your sources. This can be used for print
and online sources. Answer the questions then score each section from 1 - 10 (1 =
unreliable, 10 = excellent). Add up the scores to help you decide whether you should
use that particular source for your assignment.
Currency.......................................................... YES NO
When was the information published/posted? Recent years, however some don't
specify the date x ☐
Has the information been updated?
x ☐
Does the information need to be current for your needs?
Relevance..................................................
Does the information you found match the topic for your assignment? x ☐
Have you looked at other sources before selecting this one? x ☐
Are your questions answered by this source? x ☐
Authority.........................................................
Who is the author or publisher of the information? Creditable institutions and authors
Can you find and verify the author or publisher’s credentials? x ☐
Does the URL help you determine the source? (.edu; .com; .gov) x ☐
Accuracy..........................................................
Can you verify this information in another source? x ☐
Did the author back up his/her statements with evidence and list sources? x ☐
Are there lots of spelling or grammar errors or typos?
☐ x
Purpose...........................................................
What is the purpose of the information? Does it aim to teach, entertain,
sell, etc.? To inform, teach and report
x ☐
Is the information unbiased; does the author or publisher seem impartial?
Are there political, religious, cultural or other biases present? ☐ x
Scoring:
45-50 Excellent • 40-44 Good • 35-39 Average
30-34 May or may not be Acceptable
TOTAL SCORE
Below 30 Not an acceptable source
The Score Card is adapted from the CRAAP test created at the Meriam Library at California State University Chico.
Name of Reviewer: Rodrigo de Carvalho Filho
1. Exchange essays.
2. Type comments or highlight for suggesting revisions. Click YES or NO when completed.
Is there a strong introduction? Does it make you want to read more? Good hook? ☐ YES X NO
Underline the thesis. If the author says something like, “This essay will be about…” remind the undelined
author to rework the thesis.
Is it clear? interesting? X YES ☐ NO
Does the author create a logical flow of ideas that are connected to the thesis? (organization) X YES ☐ NO
Does the author need to use transitions to better connect the ideas and support? X YES ☐ NO
Are the quotations smoothly integrated? X YES ☐ NO
Does the author use there/their/they’re, your/you’re, to/too/two correctly? X YES ☐ NO
Is there analysis / explanation after each quotation / detail? X YES ☐ NO
Are the citations correct? (Scott, 1979, 0:45:14) X YES ☐ NO
Does the author avoid plagiarism? X YES ☐ NO
Does the author use 2 credible sources and Born a Crime? (not .com, not Wiki, etc.) X YES ☐ NO
Does the author complete the requirements of the assignment:
▪ Uses Born a Crime to illustrate or support a point X YES ☐ NO
▪ Uses the rhetorical strategies of logos, ethos, and pathos ☐ YES ☐ NO
▪ Shows what the audience has to gain or lose if we don’t understand (importance) ☐ YES X NO
▪ 2 visuals correctly placed, referred to, captioned X YES ☐ NO
▪ 3 – 5 full pages, double-spaced, APA format X YES ☐ NO
▪ References page, correct, double-spaced, alphabetical X YES ☐ NO
▪ The CRAAP page is added to the end of the paper X YES ☐ NO
Note something that the author has done well. Well organized with great transitions
Note something that should be changed before Try to improve your introduction and make sure to add images
the final copy of the essay is turned in to the
teacher.
Helpful Phrases
1. I see your thesis at the end of your intro paragraph
2. I see transition phrases at the beginning of each new paragraph
3. I can see that you …, which is a goal of this paper
4. In your … paragraph I see…., but I do not see….
5. I do not see a References page.
6. My understanding is that the thesis of this paper should … I did not clearly see … in your thesis. Instead, I see…
7. I was confused by this sentence (share the sentence) and I took it to mean (explain how you read that sentence).
8. In paragraph ___ I thought that, based on what you said in the first sentence, the whole paragraph would discuss X. But it
looks to me like at the end of the paragraph, you begin discussing Y, which felt to me like a new and different idea.
9. I thought that the second paragraph was really clear and interesting because….
10. I like the way that you structured paragraph X because ….
11. I appreciate your use of (signal phrases? citations? APA format? transitions? etc.) because I have been struggling with that in
my own writing. Thanks for the example.