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518013 - Task 4 - Yaneth Rocio Camargo Tocora
518013 - Task 4 - Yaneth Rocio Camargo Tocora
518013 - Task 4 - Yaneth Rocio Camargo Tocora
Yaneth R. Camargo
Milly A. Muñoz
November 28,2021
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Step 1-Web conference partipation or summary; OREO Table and Opinion Paragraph ... 3
Assignment 8................................................................................................................... 6
Assignment 9 ................................................................................................................... 9
Assignment 10 ................................................................................................................ 11
Assignment 11 ................................................................................................................ 14
Assignment 12 ................................................................................................................ 15
References ......................................................................................................................... 20
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The text refers to the importance of knowing how to write essays, in the same way it
provides a step by step to be successful in writing assignments, so I consider that this guide is an
excellent example to develop meaningful writing skills. Without forgetting the whole process
that a writing must have so that it can be understood and internalized by whoever reads it.
First, the writing must contain an initial planning so that the objective that was had in
the first moment can be achieved, as this will help in the entire organization of the text and
produce a complete and valuable text. For example: Knowing the requirements for the essay,
taking a moment to reflect on the topic, developing a good thesis, writing relevant content to
support the thesis, using correct grammar and sentence structure to produce clear content
(Bakaj 2012, p 5)
a writing with each of the appropriate characteristics. Before applying the writing, you should
think about the expectations that the teacher has and in this way the writing can become easy
and successful. You must have certain considerations to start a good essay one of these can be:
practice constantly, since in practice you can reach perfection and on the other hand, taking
good notes is considered a significant task for the development of a good essay. (Bakaj 2012, p 7)
Finally, and the most important thing for me, is that it is necessary to build a good thesis
statement, since this sentence will be the one that will attract the audience and will be the main
idea of our text which provides solid writing. A thesis is a single sentence that will be located as
the last sentence of the introduction paragraph. Its purpose is to state a problem and an answer
(Bakaj 2012, p 9)
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It could be argued that students by handling this practical guide to write an essay can
improve the writing and develop writing skills which will serve at all times to do the
assignments, in order to maintain the interest of the readers using their own style, simple and
meaningful.
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Assignment 8
1. Following the Content Revision Checklist, read, then evaluate the following essay.
As I exited the plane with my classmates, I realized that relying on each other’s
strengths would be essential to our visit in Russia. Throughout the ten months that I spent in
Russia, studying, traveling, working, and adapting to a new world, I learned some valuable
lessons—assumptions differ across cultures, my way is not the only way, and be prepared for
the unknown.
and physical challenges. Each of these challenges taught me the important lesson of being
flexible in planning when dealing with others. I was able to witness many changes in the
When I came home from Russia, I was elected President of the Russian Club. As
President, I took on a project to record a Russian textbook to cassette tapes for students who
are visually impaired. I recruited 15 volunteers and trained them on the recorders. Then, I
developed a schedule for the volunteers and set down reading guidelines. We completed the
organizational, leadership, and team skills. Deciding how to reorganize teams with other
managers and successfully complete team restructuring with changing staff has become
commonplace. Completing daily reports has allowed me to track trends and adjust office
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procedures or teams as needed. By training and mentoring coworkers, I have gained the
The skills that I have learned from the many trips I have taken will allow me to succeed
in the business technology program at Johnson Community College. This certificate will give
me the skills to further my career, and I will be an asset to companies in managing changes in
technology.
Overall, does the paper meet the goals of the In general, the text meets the objectives of a
assignment? Does it meet personal goals? successful writing
Assignment 9
There are two main things that I really dislike about myself. First, I am a bashful
person. For example, I am really shy when called on in class or required to speak in front of an
audience. Often, I will even become embarrassed and blush while talking on the phone to a
stranger. I’m also constantly searching for acceptance from my peers. I try very hard to please
my friends, family, boss, and teachers. Sometimes, I will even do things that I don’t
When you move into your first apartment, you will probably find that there are several
things you used at home that you now will need to buy for yourself. In the kitchen, you will
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need silverware, dishes, dish towels, pot holders, pots, pans, and other cooking utensils. You
will need towels, a shower curtain, a bath mat, and toiletries in your bathroom. If you plan to
clean your apartment once in a while, you’ll also need cleaning supplies and equipment
specific to each room. In the bedroom, you are going to need sheets, blankets, and pillows. You
will probably want to have a television set or stereo as well as furniture in your living room.
Assignment 10
b. If the kids would just be (quiet/quite), I think I could finish this report.
a. Look at the facilities in other countries, have you’ll see the U. S. has far better
facilities.
Look at the facilities in other countries; and have you’ll see the U. S. has far better
facilities.
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4. Rewrite the following paragraph. Eliminate any sentence fragments or run-on sentences.
talented people. Should investigate the elements required to be a good teacher before making a
final decision. On first thought, it might seem that a good teacher is one who is very
knowledgeable of the subject matter, a master of what he or she wants to teach, however
others would disagree. Good teachers are those who connect with students and are able to
interest students in the process of thinking and inquiring about the subject matter. Teaching is
more than knowing the subject matter it’s understanding where students are and dreaming
She is interested in becoming a teacher. A profession that is in great need of talented people.
Should investigate the elements required to be a good teacher before making a final decision. On
first thought, it might seem that a good teacher is one who is very knowledgeable of the subject
matter, however others would disagree. Good teachers are those who connect with students and
are able to interest students in the process of thinking and inquiring about the subject matter.
Teaching is more than knowing the subject matter it’s understanding where students are and
dreaming about where they can go with the subject matter.
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Several months ago February 29 I had just watched the ending of a very funny movie I
reached over, turned off the TV and was just beginning to dream quite pleasantly when the
was my best friend telling me he had just been given extra tickets to the yankees game he
Several months ago, February 29, I had just watched the ending of a very funny movie. I
reached over, turned off the TV and was just beginning to dream quite pleasantly when the
familiar ring of my telephone suddenly startled me awake groggily. I answered my telephone,
it was my best friend telling me he had just been given extra tickets to the Yankees game he
excitedly asked would you like to go.
a. (Fewer/Less) people are killed in airplane accidents each year (than/then) in car
accidents.
Assignment 11
A person’s accomplishments in life are dependent upon his personal prediction of his
performance. In actuality, anyone can effect his own future, positively or negatively, through
anything that is of value, he is correct. Difficulties will be encountered that are overwhelming
in his pursuits of success because of the fact that he is beginning with self-doubt. Although he
might be qualified to accomplish a particular project, he will probably fail because of the fact
that he will be easily persuaded to surrender his efforts and stop struggling toward his goal.
Actually, anyone can affect his own future, positively or negatively. It all depends on how you
view yourself. If an individual sees himself as incapable of producing anything that is of value,
that is what will happen. Difficulties will happen because he is beginning to doubt himself.
Although, he might be qualified to accomplish a particular goal or project he will probably fail
Assignment 12
1. Rewrite the following paragraph using questions and answers, different sentence lengths
Henri Henklebeck is my best friend. He called last Sunday. He asked if I’d heard the
news of the circus coming to town. He talked to me for a long time. We decided to spend the
Henri Henklebeck, my best friend, called. “Did you hear that the circus is coming to
town?” he asked. and then we were talking for a long time, my friend said: What do you think
if we go to the circus? and I said: - its a wonderful idea. then he told me, see you later? and I
2. Write one sentence using each type of figurative language listed below.
Writing was quite a troublesome process in my initial training, but when I discovered my
vocation, it sparked my interest to focus on the world of letters and word formation. Without
and a doubt, the writing process is not as easy as you think, it is important to note that a good
writer must consider certain characteristics so that his writing can be successful. For this reason,
I want to rescue a phrase that argues the above "there is a moment when all obstacles collapse,
all conflicts fall apart, and one comes up with things that one had not dreamed of and then,
there is nothing better in life than write" Gabriel Garcia Marquez Conversations with Plinio
As it was said at first, writing takes into account some important characteristics, for this
reason writing does not depend on certain steps, but on a constant process, which develops the
necessary skills to apply them at different times (before, during and after). The writing process
was initially frustrating since I wrote texts without the necessary observation to obtain a good
writing, normally in school they taught us only to write depending on a theme or topic, so, in the
development of the body of the text it could be messy and without the correct structure
The beginning of my writing process was unstructured, my writing was messy and
without meaningful structure; this moment I can say that I have improved in each of the stages,
I consider that writing is a continuous learning, I think that it resembles the reading process
since, as time, from what you learn and what you study you can have sufficient skills to develop
you as a good writer. Therefore, it is important to highlight that the teacher or guide's feedback
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is constructive for writing and progressively positive changes can be noticed in the assignments
Seow in the book "The Writing Process and The Writing Process", It is necessary to apply the
stages of writing so that you can have a good result such as we need to find or ask ourselves what
we want to write, focus on the thesis statement so that you can have a correct direction at the
time of reading a piece of paper Also, the thesis not only guides the reader, but also the writer,
since this sentence keeps the article organized. If I look back from the beginning of the writing
process, I can say that I have improved in my writing skills. This course really fulfilled all the
expectations I had about writing in English, without a doubt, I can see the progress I have made
Thinking about writing today is one of my greatest satisfactions because I feel that it has
been a constant work, difficulties have arisen from the beginning, but I am sure that every day is
a time of learning to improve and have skills to become a very good writer. Every process of
knowledge is difficult, but with perseverance positive results can be obtained. "If you want to be
a writer, you must do two things above all others: read a lot and write a lot” Stephen King
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