Ticket Id: 25869

04/03/2019

Dr. Jeson Roberts Commented [ESL1]: spelling

Gastroenterologist
Newtown Hospital
111 High Street
Newtown

Dear Dr. Roberts,

Re: Ms Anne Hall, DOB: 19/09/1965

I am writing to refer Ms Hall, a 54-year-old teacher, whose signs and symptoms are suggestive of gastro-
esophageal reflux along with the possibility of stricture, for further management.

Ms hall is divorced and has two children. She is a social drinker and her family history is notable for peptic Commented [ESL2]: H
ulcer disease related to her father as well. Moreover, her mother is a hypertensive as well as an asthmatic
patient. Furthermore, she is a known asthmatic since childhood. She was once suffered from dyspepsia in Commented [ESL3]: has been
2004 as well.

Today, Ms Hall presented with complaints of dysphagia and loss of weight possibly due to upper Commented [ESL4]: an
respiratory tract infection over the last two weeks. Additionally, it was also associated with epigastric pain
which was radiating to the back. Apart from this, she has recently increased her coffee consumption. She
has taken Aspirin occasionally. Commented [ESL5]: a

In light of the above, I believe that it could be a case of gastro-esophageal reflux along with the possibility
of stricture. Therefore, it would be greatly appreciated if you could do his further investigation and Commented [ESL6]: carry out
diagnosis. Besides that, please give your expert opinion and proceed endoscopy if required. Commented [ESL7]: provide a
Commented [ESL8]: with an
Please do not hesitate to contact me if you have any queries.

Yours sincerely,
Doctor
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