➢Describing changes in multiple periods ➢Practice: Writing a full Task 1 essay to describe a Line graph OVERVIEW STATEMENT I. Introductory expressions: ➢Overall, ➢As an overall trend, ➢As a general trend, ➢As the graph/ chart shows, ➢As can be seen from the graph/ chart, ➢It is clear from the graph/ chart that II. Different ways to write an overview statement
1. If there is one common trend, describe that trend.
➢ Both/ All + (X) + experienced/ witnessed + upward/downward trends over the given period.
➢ There was a similar upward/downward trend in both/all + (X) +
over the given period. AVERAGE AMOUNT OF FASTFOOD CONSUMED IN UK (Gram/Person)
2. If there are two different trends, describe both of them
There was a (similar) upward/downward trend in + ( A and B) while/whereas + (C and D) experienced a contrasting movement + over the given period. DESCRIBE MULTIPLE PERIODS IN ONE SENTENCE
▪ Period 1, X + increased/ decreased + adv + by + (change), then continued its +
upward/ downward trend more/less + adv + (to…) + period 2. From 1960 to 1965, the number of cases increased slightly by 5, then continued its upward trend more significantly to 200 in 1970. ▪ Period 1, X + increased/ decreased + adv + by + (change), but later/ then decreased/ increased/ leveled out + adv + (to/at…) + period 2 Over the following 5 years, the number of cases boomed by 300, but later leveled out at 500 until 1980. ▪ Period 1, there was a/an + adj + increase/ decrease of (change) + in + X, which was followed by/ which led to + a/an + adj + a rise/ fall to/ a plateau at.. Period 2 Between 1980 and 1985, there was a sharp fall of 150 in the number of cases, which was followed by a dive to zero by 1990. PRACTICE: DESCRIBE A LINE GRAPH
STEP 1: Write an Introduction.
The line graph depicts the amount of money earned by four cafes in New York in the previous year. PRACTICE: DESCRIBE A LINE GRAPH
STEP 2: Write an Overview Statement.
Overall, there was a downward trend in The Tea Room’s income, while the figures for Express, Wifi Café and Café Cool showed contrasting movements over the given period. STEP 3.1: Describe the line with the highest values throughout the given period. Over the first ten months of last year, The Tea Room’s income fluctuated remarkably at around 140 thousand dollars, but later dove to 50 thousand dollars by the end of the year. STEP 3.2: For lines with no typical changes, describe them in 1-2 simple sentences. The amount of money earned by Internet Express started at 100 thousand dollars, then fell gradually by 20 thousand dollars in April. Over the following 4 months, there was a leveling out at 80 thousand dollars, which was followed by a sharp rise to 140 thousand dollars in December. STEP 4: For lines with a similar trend, group and describe them in one paragraph. Wifi Café’s income increased steadily by 10 thousand dollars from January to May, then continued its upward trend more considerably to 100 thousand dollars in July. Between July and August, there was a significant decline of 40 thousand dollars, which led to a boom to 190 thousand dollars in December. In contrast, Café Cool’s income experienced remarkable fluctuation between 20 and 60 thousand dollars from January to November, but later increased noticeably to 120 thousand dollars in the last month of the year.