Considering a high income is the most critical factor when choosing a career.

To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

Agree
PARAPHRASE: It is believed that the main reason for choosing a
vocation is getting a huge amount of money which is considered one of the main
aspects.

THESIS: I completely agree with the given statement as getting a high

salary gives motivation to employees and makes life better.

Body 1 motivation

Body 2 makes life better

Disagree
PARAPHRASE: It is believed that the main reason for choosing a
vocation is getting a huge amount of money which is considered one of the main
aspects.
THESIS: I completely disagree with the given statement as there are other
factors such as job satisfaction and one can not buy happiness with money are
more essential than salary.

Body 1 Job satisfaction

Body happiness cannot be bought with money

Partly agree or disagree – balanced

PARAPHRASE: It is believed that the main reason for choosing a

vocation is getting a huge amount of money which is considered one of the main
aspects.
THESIS: In my opinion, although well-paid jobs make life better and give
a sense of motivation, I believe that other aspects of this phenomenon such as
job satisfaction are considered one of the main features of choosing a career.

Body 1 makes life better and gives motivation

Body 2 job satisfaction