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Part 1:

The images illustrates the rate of jobs being deployed to Australian males and females according
to their ages in 3 years, 1984, 2001, and 2004.

Overall, the percentage of men being employed remained still, except for older generations of
workers,

In detail, the most popular wave of workers was in 1984 for men, with 60% for youngsters, 80%
for middle-aged, and 40% for older generations. These statistics remained the same in 2001, but
soon in 2014, the amount of youngsters working in Australia lowered from 60% to around 50%,
and the proportionality of older citizens working increased significantly to around 60%

For women, the proportion of young female working remained still throughout the 3 years of the
survey, at 60%. The statistics for middle-aged women and elderlies had increased significantly
throughout the 3 years. From 1984 to 2001, the amount of middle-aged women workers rose to
70%, and elder women employees from 10% to 20%. Finally in 2014, both numbers had its fair
share of development, at 80% and 40% respectively.

Part 2

As some may say, music prioritizes relaxation and provides tranquility within one’s body. For
me, I agree with this take, and this essay will elaborate why.

On the one hand, music has a lot more usage rather than just providing peacefulness, it can also
provide in a more normal context. Some people may use it to increase their discipline within a
job, and give more energy to complete the work, for examples, working out, studying,
working,... Others may consider music as a tool to cope with, or boost their psychological state
of mind to be better when they are in difficult situations, for examples, arguments with your love
ones, a chaotic breakup, or someone’s death,... Furthermore, music is also seen as a instrument
for others to create songs that can illustrate the artist’s emotions and main motives. Listening to
an artist’s creation may help music-dwellers lessen their stress levels by encouraging them to
focus on creativity.

On the other hand, as mentioned above, music can be a stress reliever, but the prevalent benefit
of music is mostly for relaxation. People’s ways to create tranquility varies, for examples,
viewing an magnificent art piece, listening to music, or going out for a drive late at night,... In
today’s time, many teenagers listen to music, as a way to stop the bustling life in life, and get
some time to enjoy their lives, rethinking about life,... Adults also enjoy the orchestra of music to
alleviate the stresses of work and parenting. Research also shows that music can be a medication
tool, because some type of orchestras can relax the brain with more effectiveness than other
types of medicine.
In conclusion, music has a diverse amount of benefits for purposes, but generally, they can all be
defined as a way to create peacefulness.

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