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Statement of Purpose

Torrens University
Master of Business Administration (Advanced)

Fashion is an intrinsic part of our lives; both are ever-evolving. The fashion industry has always
stimulated my curiosity. I am deeply fascinated by the creative and innovative world of fashion. Fashion
designing is one of the most exciting and demanding professions of today. I aspire to be a globally renowned
fashion designer with my own personal brand. I firmly believe that the Master of Business Administration
(Advanced) at Torrens University, Australia would equip me with the requisite skill set to progress towards my
career ambitions.

I, Manjot Kaur, was born on 13th August, 2000 in the city Kurali, Distt. Mohali, Punjab, India.
Academically, I have completed my Matriculation Examination, which is standard 10th from Punjab School
Education Board in the year 2016 securing 74.7%. Thereafter I completed my Senior Secondary Examination
which is standard 12th from Punjab School Education Board in the year 2018 securing 79.3%. I hail from
Punjab state which is renowned for agriculture as well the Ludhiana city is known for its biggest textile industry
not only in India but also in the world. I was fascinated by clothing, apparel and textile industry since most of my
kith and kin where involved with the industry. As stated earlier the sheer intricacies and complexity of clothing
industry piqued my interest since its unison creates a vibrant industry. To understand the science behind the
clothing, apparel, textile and fashion industry, I decided to pursue Bachelor of Science in Fashion Designing
from Panjab University which I successfully completed in 2021 securing 69.8%.

The entrepreneur in me wants to setup my own business which would require considerable business
and financial acumen to succeed. Hence in order to further my aspiration and also as a natural progression
academically, I decided to pursue Master of Business Administration. Now, after consultation with my parents,
teachers and friends, it became apparent that Master of Business Administration in India is taught from
examination point of view and imparts only theoretical knowledge without practical and vocational training. I
decided that for my better future education prospects, I shall study aboard. I started searching for options in
Australia and some other countries. I began by starting my IELTS training and consequently gave my
IELTS test on 9th October 2021. Where I scored 6.0 Bands Overall with Listening: 6.0, Reading: 6.0, Writing:
6.0, Speaking: 6.0.

Reason for doing 10 weeks English for Academic Purpose (EAP): With this 10weeks course I will learn
English quickly and increase my confidence. It will assist me to adjust in the entirely new learning methodology,
help me gain the knowledge related to assignments regarding how is it done and prepare myself for the
upcoming challenges that are sure to come when I face the talented students from around the world in my
master degree.

Demerits of studying Master of Business Administration in India?


The Indian Institute of Management Studies (IIMs) are among the premier institutes for business
administration. There are numerous other private institutes which offer myriad business administration courses
such as MBA, PGDM, BBA, BBM and MHA among all others. There are a total of 20 IIMs institute in India but
Indian Institute of Management (IIM) Ahmedabad, IIM Bangalore, IIM Kolkata are among the most sort
after by students. https://collegedunia.com/courses/master-of-business-administration-mba

Apart from the IIMs there are various institutes well known for their management studies such as Indian
School Business Hyderabad, Xavier Institute of Management Bhubaneswar, Birla Institute of
Management Technology Noida, LPU Jalandhar, Flame University, Shailesh J Mehta School of
Management IIT Bombay, Christ University Bangalore, NM Institute of Management Studies Mumbai,
Symbiosis Institute of Business Management Pune, Madras Christian College, Loyola Institute of
Business Admiration Chennai, among many others. https://www.shiksha.com/mba/ranking/top-private-mba-
colleges-in-india/125-2-0-0-0.
Now there are millions of aspiring students who give a highly competitive and taxing entrance exams to
get admittance in top management institutes in India such as CAT, XAT, GMAT, CMAT, MAT, ATMA, NMAT,
SNAP, MAHCET, among others. In order to crack these entrance exams student undergo months of
preparations and training. Furthermore the IIMs across 20 institutes has only 10000 seats and their PGP courses
has only 5000 intake capability. The entrance exams are getting highly competitive and grueling every year and
with more than 100 students vying for one seat. The quality and standards of the private run management
institutes are deteriorating every year in the face of lack of infrastructure, lack of competent faculty, rigid and
outdated curriculum, among others. There are more than 5000 management and B-School in India, now greater
number of these institute are closing down each year due to poor quality of education and training, below par
infrastructure, poor teaching faculty and lack of on-campus placement. The management institutes in India fails
to provide training in emerging business perspectives and innovative modern business standards, very less
diversity among peers as compared to B-Schools abroad as majority of top MBAs in India are engineers, there is
not a good start-up culture compared to abroad, lack of practical learning because of the Indian Curriculum and
bad infrastructure, less experienced classrooms because many in India pursue MBA right after college without
any work experience, moreover MBAs in India is pursued for monetary reason of high paying jobs unlike
abroad. In view of these inadequacies of the private business schools in India and the impossibility of securing
admission in IIMs in India, I decided to study Master of Business Administration aboard. (https://www.business-
standard.com/article/pti-stories/only-7-per-cent-mba-graduates-employable-assocham-study-
116042700823_1.html)

Exploring options abroad:


In quest of an international degree, I began my research by exploring options in various countries and
after considerable deliberations, I narrowed down my options to USA, UK and Australia.
Most of the top multinational corporations and tech-company are USA based. USA is renowned for its
highest rated education institute in the world. As per the QS Global Ranking 2022, USA has more than 6
institutions in the top 10. The standard and quality of education imparted by USA institutes are unparalleled.
The degree awarded by these institutes are acknowledged and recognized all over the globe. There are many
colleges in USA providing MBA such as University of Michigan, New York University, Duke University,
University of California, Cornell University, Dartmouth College, Emory University, Georgetown
university, The Ohio State University, Arizona State University, among all other.
https://studyabroad.shiksha.com/top-mba-colleges-in-usa-abroadranking30.
Now, my research also yielded a very stark reality that in USA that after the fall of Trump government,
there is still resentment in the society in general which has led to a less congenial society. The George Floyd
incident and thousands of Trump supporters openly carrying arms at protest were expected to converge on US
capital to oppose election of Joe Biden https://www.reuters.com/article/us-usa-election-protests-
idUSKBN2992JI , have left me and parents worried about the political scenario in USA. In wake of these violent
incidents my parents do not want me to study in USA.

United Kingdom (UK) was the next destination in quest of my international master’s degree. Sixteen of
the top 100 MBA institute in the world are based in UK and four institutes rank in the top 10. The institutes in UK
are research oriented and the research resources are aplenty. The research conducted by the UK universities
are world leading and have an impeccable international recognition. MBA from UK accords student to
experience this robust research stage to explore their ideas in a pragmatic industrial setting.
MBA International Business
Birmingham University – Birmingham Business School
Intakes September
Duration12 months
Tuition £31,500
Features: Applicants who do not meet entry requirements may apply for the option to earn a Graduate Diploma
before beginning the MBA program.
Program can be completed in 12 months, 21 months or 24 months.
https://www.birmingham.ac.uk/postgraduate/courses/taught/business/mba.aspx

MBA
Brunel University London
Intakes January, September
Duration12 months
Tuition January 2022 are £24,270
Concentrations on Digital Innovation Management
Healthcare Management
General Management
Application Deadlines August 20, 2021 (which I missed when I noticed)
https://www.brunel.ac.uk/business-school/brunel-mba-in-london/full-time-mba

MBA
Coventry University
Intakes January, May, September
Duration12 months
Tuition16,700
Features Tuition is based on the UK/EU resident rate.
Non-UK/EU resident tuition rate is 12,450 GBP.
https://www.coventry.ac.uk/course-structure/pg/2019-20/fbl/masters-in-business-administration/
Many of the UK University and MBA institute have close industrial links which may help students to meet and
learn from the pioneers of the industry and at the same time creating business networks and contacts which
may be fruitful for future educational and business relations. But most of the UK universities offers only two
main intakes January / September as I missed for January, I was left with September intake whereas as in
Australia universities offers multiple intakes February, July, November. Moreover, Torrens University MBA
(Advanced) program offering more detailed course structure, which enhance my professional academic profile
and enhance my career in future.

Reasons for studying MBA in Australia.


Australian B-Schools lays considerable emphasize on interdisciplinary and all-encompassing learning, at
the same time importance is given to development of soft skills such as communication, inter-personal,
leadership, team work, creative & innovative free thinking and problem solving which leads to all round
development of students. The degrees awarded by the Australian institutions are recognized and highly sought
after all over the globe due to its excellent reputation of the Australian education system. International students
are protected under Australian law through the Education Services for Overseas Students (ESOS) Act and
national regulatory agencies such as the Tertiary Education Quality and Standards Agency (TEQSA).
Australian Qualification Framework (AQF) allows countries around the world to recognize qualification and
issue the comparable qualifications for local use.
Australian universities provides around 75 internationally recognized management programs, many of
these have global accreditation from AACSB and EQUIS. There are variety of business courses offered by
various Australian universities with specialization in wide gamut of courses covering accounting, banking,
business information systems, economics, finance, logistics, human resource management,
international business, marketing and management. Australian management and MBA programs enables
students to learn both practical as well academic aspect of education. Australian business qualifications allows
students to enter a wide range of careers in a variety of businesses. There is a strong focus on developing the
knowledge and skills that employers want such as leadership skills, ethics, global perspective and independent
thinking. The recent Australian business and management graduates at the postgraduate level are earning one
of the highest salaries in any field. While studying management in Australia, international students are extended
an opportunity to gain experience by completing internship with local company, completing an international
exchange program or study tour. Australian’s multiculturism provides an opportunity for students to study with
people belonging to various culture, thereby enabling to learn and develop diverse cultural perspective on
management. Australia provides an environment for study that combine Eastern and Western business and
management approaches. Australia consistently features in top 3 most live-able countries in the world due to its
excellent education system, high standards of living , friendly and harmonious lifestyle, natural beauty and
vibrant city life.
I was looking for a management program that provides both practical and theoretical learning, imparting
vocational and professional skills, opportunity to enhance my inter-personal skills, networking & communication
skills as well as an opportunity to learn along with internship and work exchange program, all of these criterion
has been fulfilled by the Australian management and B-School institute.

Why did I choose Torrens University?


In, Australia, there are many institutes offering Master of Business Administration, such as RMIT University,
Victoria University, Federation University, University of South Australia, Macquarie University, Griffith
University, University of South Australia, Torrens University among many others. But being an international
student Torrens provided me with an advanced program which other university could not.
Torrens University, Brisbane Griffith University, Brisbane Master James Cook University, Brisbane
Master of Business of Business Administration (5158) - Master of Business Administration
Administration Advanced | Griffith University - JCU Brisbane
Torrens University
MBA (Advanced) 2years MBA 1.5years MBA 1.5years
Globally Focused curriculum This course is focused around; This course is focused on
High-End Technology Sustainability, finance, accounting management perspective.
Hundreds of Partner Companies and reporting and etc. due to which Admission requirement
around the Globe its admission requirement is not Applicants must have a minimum
Over 90% Alumini Employability matching my profile also. of 4 years full-time equivalent
Actual industry professionals 1) two years of relevant work professional work experience in
teaching experience and management, leadership or
2) one year in a role supervisory level in a business
demonstrating leadership environment
experience .
AUD$ 26,899/year AUD$ 42,000/year AUD$ 49,080/year
16 Subjects 120 Credits NA on site

Edith Cowan University offering Master of Supply Chain and Logistics Management, University of
Wollongong offering Master in Supply Chain Management which is focusing on topics like warehousing
transportation of goods and all. And for this course entry requirement is not matching with my academic profile
as this course is suitable for students who want to pursue career in logistics.
Torrens University Australia provides quality MBA program at most competitive price range.
https://studyabroad.shiksha.com/searchabroad/?
q=Masters+of+Business&co[]=5&c[]=239&cl[]=Masters&cl[]=Masters+Diploma&cl[]=Masters+Certificate&qer=ye
s&tid=18037871&ref=homePage. At the same time Torrens provides practical and relevant postgraduate
business and project management studies in Australia. Torrens University has provided for more than two
decades comprehensive range of industry recognized post-graduation courses. The courses at Torrens are
designed by industry expert with core focus on practical, vocational and industry relevant training. The faculty at
Torrens comprises of academics who have relevant industry experience and strong industry networks. Torrens
University provides access to industry placement with the leading organization around the world. Torrens
accords hands-on experience in every course which enable students to gain confidence and increase their
employability. At Torrens, students during their course have access to ongoing support, advice, and
encouragement through University Success Coaching program. The success coaches are highly skilled leaders
that enable students to get most out of their education and these coaches work towards enabling students
achieve their career goals.

Torrens boasts a network of 10,000 alumni and students around the world, who hold managerial positions in
companies such as Ergon Energy, Meteorology, Etihad Airways and Telstra. Torrens has 13 campuses
spread across Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane and Adelaide which covers various field of studies such as
Health, Hospitality, Education, Business and Design. The state of the art campuses are purpose built to impart
collaborative learning, enhance critical thinking, decision making, enabling creative and innovative problem
solutions. Torrens has industry connection, network partners and field leading pioneers that enable students in
achieving their career goals, augment career development that provide critical edge required for gaining success
in competitive job market. The class strength at Torrens is around 25 students, this enables the teachers to have
one on one interaction with students, enables in creating interactive and engaging lectures, thereby teachers
can facilitate stimulating class discussion where students are encourage to express their ideas.

Why I choose Master of Business Management (Advanced) program?


The Master of Business Management (Advanced) is designed to cater international students like me, has I was
looking for an extended course. The course being designed by industry experienced academics will strengthen
my business acumen and leadership skills not only help in my career but also my future entrepreneurial
endeavors. The course shall help me develop skills, knowledge, and connection to ensure solid, long term
business returns. This course is a candidate for accreditation with the ACBSP. This course shall make me
aware of the global market, expand my professional network, improve my communication & soft skills, provide
relevant industry exposure and help me understand time management. The master’s degree shall me
develop advanced skills in order to critically analyze information, synthesize knowledge and
communicate research findings effectively for a variety of career settings. It shall develop my strategic
thinking, leadership, research and negotiation skills. The course offers graduate to do quality research and
exercise the skills in improving the situation at hand. Business administration master’s degree is thus a wise
decision for young professionals and those in need to improve on their careers.
This course consists of total of sixteen subjects of which there are ten core and six elective
subjects. The core subjects that I shall be learning include Business Environment, Business Communications,
Business Decision Analytics, Management People and Teams, Dynamic Leadership, Systems Thinking, Strategic
Management, Business Capstone.

In order to be successful as a manager in corporate sector and to support my future entrepreneurial


endeavor, the master of business administration shall equips me with necessary skill sets, whereas practical &
work integrated learning and an internship & research project shall provide industry exposure in real world
environment and necessary vocational training. Thus a master of business administration shall me to learn
technical, managerial and leadership skills. It shall provide me a foundation to learn business concepts like
accounting, finance, marketing, etc. I shall provide me practical opportunities through internship, group
projects, presentations to apply business concepts, it shall help me build both my soft and hard skills such as
management, leadership, communication and negotiation, it shall offer me an opportunity to switch between
industries, locations, or functions thereby opening up a range of global opportunities, it shall provide me with a
solid foundation for to start my own business in the near future.

Career Opportunities in India:


Indian domestic apparel and textile industry contributes 5% of the country’s GDP and 12% of the
country’s export earnings. India is the 6 th largest exporter of textiles and apparel in the world. India is one of the
largest producers of cotton and jute in the world. India is the 2 nd largest producer of silk in the world and 95% of
the world’s hand-woven fabrics comes from India. The Indian technical textiles segment is estimated at 16 billion
dollars which is around 6% of the global market. The textile and apparel industry in India is the 2 nd largest
employer in the country providing direct employment to 45 million people and 100 million people in allied
industries. https://www.investindia.gov.in/sector/textiles-apparel#:~:text=India%20is%20among%20the
%20world's,of%20the%20country's%20export%20earnings.&text=India%20is%20one%20of%20the,and%20jute
%20in%20the%20world
After completing my Master of Business Administration, I shall be returning to India, where awaits my parents,
who are pillars of my strength and my source of inspiration. I want to start my clothing, apparel & textile trading
and consultancy company in the near future but before that I need to get considerable work experience of 10-12
years in textile industry.

The Master of Business Administration shall open doors in the various business sectors and the roles
which I shall be able to fulfil include Business Development Manager, , Operations Manager, Process
Analyst, Senior Marketing Manager, Senior Business Analyst, Marketing Executive, Market Planner,
Management Consultant, Sales Manager, among many others.

Fashion Merchandiser
Enhance Lifestyle
Delhi(Saket )
MBA, B.FashionTech, BFA, PG Diploma(Fashion / Design)
Fresher Salary 40,000/- Monthly (Fashion Merchandiser Jobs in Delhi - Enhance Lifestyle (freshersworld.com)

Store Manager Emporio Armani Jr. / Stella McCartney Kids


KidsUp Global, Chandigarh, India ((1) Store Manager Emporio Armani Jr. / Stella McCartney Kids | KidsUp Global
| LinkedIn)

Operations Manager
SockSoho Panchkula, Haryana, India ((1) Operations Manager | SockSoho | LinkedIn)
Working with new start-up company will allow me to apply my knowledge and skills to make difference in the
company.

The top best textile companies in India are Arvind Mills Ltd, Vardhman Textiles Ltd, Welspun India Ltd,
Raymond Ltd, Trident Ltd, KPR Mill Ltd, Page Industries Ltd, Nitin Spinners Ltd, Rupa & Company Ltd,
Himatsingha Seide Ltd and many others. There are many Indian fashion house of international repute such as
NorBlack NorWhite, NoNasties, Grassroot, Love is Mighty, Mogra, Anokhi, Pinnacle, Raw Mango, Behno and
many others. There are giant Indian fashion brands such as Allen Solly, Provogue, Anit Dongre, Van Huesen,
Park Avenue, Mufti, Monte Carlo, Peter England, Fab India and many others.

Fabindia offers careers for fresh graduates, as well as individuals with work experience for Indian Stores:
Open Position: Retail Planner (Info Source: Careers | Fabindia)

Head - Ecommerce
House of Anita Dongre Limited Navi Mumbai, Maharashtra, India ((1) Head - Ecommerce | House of Anita
Dongre Limited | LinkedIn) other jobs options: ((1) House of Anita Dongre Limited: Jobs | LinkedIn)

There are many opportunities for a master of business administration graduate in various
governmental, private and corporate sectors in India. After gaining considerable experience of over 10-12 years,
I shall be starting my own trading and consulting firm in India, I want to regulate and organize the textile
industry in India and I hope to make small and medium enterprises more profitable by making use of the
knowledge and experience gained in Australia.

Name: KULWANT SINGH // PARAMJIT KAUR // SUKHPREET KAUR

Relation to Applicant APPLICANT FATHER // APPLICANT MOTHER // APPLICANT SISTER

Annual Income: INR 4,99,260.00 // INR 4,98,300.00 // INR 3,85,000.00

(TOTAL INCOME— INR 13,82,560.00)

Employers Name (or Business RETIRED PENSIONER (EX-ARMY) // OWN BUSINESS // OWN
Name, If Self-employed): COACHING CLASSES

My father also has around INR. 32,55,076/-Lakh in his bank account at IDBI Bank and SBI Bank to support me
during my study in Australia.

Visa Obligations for International Students:


I will be much thankful to the representative of the Australian High Commission if I am given the opportunity to
study in Australia and pursue my dream. At the same time, I assure you that I will strictly follow the rules and
regulations of my education provider and the Australian government’s law as I am also aware of the obligations
of student under higher education visa system SSVF (Simplified Student Visa Framework).

I have clearly understood visa conditions regarding my study in Australia.


Some of them are;
1. I cannot change the university for six months up on enrolment.
2. I must notify to university if I change the address / contact details within 7 working days.
3. I must have valid health insurance during my stay in Australia.
4. I cannot work more than 40 hours per fortnight.
5. I need to maintain 80% of attendance.
6. I need to clear 50% in every subject in each term.

COMMITMENT
Therefore, I promise to be a hardworking and sincere to my studies. If granted a permit/visa, I promise to obey
all the rules and regulations required as a student. All the required documents for processing my applications
are attached here with this application. I’d be really grateful if I could get the opportunity to pursue my degree in
reputed Institution. Above mentioned information’s are true and correct in every detail. Therefore, I assure you
that I will be honest towards your rules and regulation and will be very grateful if you consider my application to
study in Australia.

All the required documents for processing my application are attached with this application and I would be
highly grateful if my application is considered allowing me to pursue my further studies in Australia.

Sincerely Yours,
Manjot Kaur

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