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#orimi_sep_09
#orimi_sep_09
written by
Avinash Annapragada
Phone 9700700566/8125340690
E-mail avinashavi360@gmai.com
1.
Theeskundam ani alaa bend avthu unte, phone ring avthundi... chusthe athani father call
chestunnaru...
Sudden ga vague flash of images, thanaki inka athani father ki past lo ina conversation
mind lo play avthundi...
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vaallu thittukunte danki ram react avthunnadu bayapaduthu... lift kosm wait chestunte...
aah godva pedhaga avthunte... vallu kindhakostaremo ani chusi... osthunnattu anpisthe...
lift ochelope metlu digesthadu fast ga.
Bayam tho em cheyalo thelika thana lover ki phone chesthadu... thanu
call cut chesthundi...
whatsapp chat is going on in between... as he walks (voice over as they text each
other)
GIRL
Ammamma vaallu ocharu, assalu gap
dorakteldu...
RA
M
eee saari enni days?
2.
GIRL
Maybe 2-3 days... a? ne birthday time ki
ocharana?
RA
M
Emodhu le, vaallathone undu...
GIRL
sorry ram.
RAM
GIRL
nenu raalenane, gift iddamani oka
book courieer chesanu...
RA
M
Book huh?
RAM
GIRL
naku telsu kada ram neekem
kaavalo...
RA
M
ina book evaru chaduthaare...
GIRL
Nu chadvalanna avi Out of stock
unnayi...
RA
M
Out of stock huh?
(he remembers something...)
naku pampinchindi me father personl
copy anaku....
GIRL
Mari nu alaa ummm ani unte naaku
nachatle...
RA
M
Antha risk avsrama?
3.
RA
M Adi kaaade...
GIRL
Inkem matladaku... only 3 days no
msg/calls. Once again happy
birthday ram, kalvaleka
pothunnanduku sorry... book matrm
jagrattha... Bye
RA
M
Bye
Wrap chesina book alaane patkoni chusi.. eppatiki chaduthano annattu face petti, bag lo
petkuntadu...
FADE OUT.
Venu drive chestuntadu... ajay holding a beer... Ajay asks venu to have
it...
VENU
Ippatke ekkuvindi nu
(asks him to have it...)
AJAY
Arey venu! manam entha pichollam
ra... em telvani age la, life lo
ededo cheyalanukuntam. anni
telsinanka, silent ipothadm endi
ra?
Venu smiles...
4.
VEN
U
ooke alochisthe dimak karab
ithadi.. ina em cheste emundi ra..
happy ga unnama leda anthe!
Ajay smiles... shook his head... having a sip... ajay showing little finger that he wants to
pee...
Ajay's done he's coming towards venu and He's passing by...
RAM (CONT'D)
Aah anni theeskunna nanna...
Ajay ki "nanna" ani vinapadhindi... ajay closing his eyes as if he didnt want to hear it...
Venu looks at ram...
AJAY
Rey!
Ram looks around, looks at venu.. venu asks him to come... as ram's coming... in presence
of ajay again...
RA
M
Sare nanna... nen malli chestha...
RA
M
Bhayya... odhu bhayya...
Ram answer cheyadu, venu book padesthunnattu chesthadu ventane, ram nods..
Ram book ni alaane chusthuntadu... laakkodanki try chesthadu kaani miss avthadu...
venu chinna smile isthu thala addanga ooputhuntadu...
VENU
Ekkaduntv ra nu aah?
VEN
U
Edo pakkaki unnattu nadchukunta
etla pothunv ra?
Ram looks at him...
AJAY
Daddy daddy ankuntu velthademo!
Ajay horn kodthadu... Venu ran towards ajay... Ram just stares at him...
Ajay looks at ram...
AJAY
Happy daddy journey!
They drove away...
VENU (O.S.)
Arey monnatlaga inti mundhu odhu...
shop deggara idisheyi...
Ram bag zip close chesi,kinda unna wrapper ni bag lo pettkoni vallane chusthuntadu...
vellipothadu.
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FADE OUT.
Opened her chat and typing... "book, poyindi love..." Ani text send cheddam
Internet lo Search chesthadu... out of stock osthayi... Book store near by ekkada undo
maps lo chuskoni... naduchukuntu velthadu...
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FLASHBACK - START
AJAY'S FATHER
Entra idi?
(Ajay's father ventane thana wife
tho)
Emeee veedu job kottesaadu...
Ajay looks away, looks down... father understood that ajay is not paying attention...
Ajay tries to convey but he couldnt... ajay doesn't know what to reply...
FLASHBACK - END
9.
Present
There are 2 guys who are holding a display board regarding water, written as pollution
level high. (In front display "pollution" is written and back "high") The other guy
holding the camera. They tried to take a photo of their both tried selfie and they couldn’t
and in between hero saw them while having a selfie and he reminded of the camera and
got irritated again.. one of the two guys tried to ask and tried to ask, but he shouted
angrily at that guy. He tried to shout at him and on of his friends took him out of the
frame.
ajay is so angry in that mind state of he’s worthless compared to others and yelled at that
guy. one of the two guys observed ajay’s face, his bag and thought he’s a bit frustrated
and his partner thought to quarrel and he stopped
his partner as he says that ajay is frustrated and he reacted that way. Ajay's eyes seem to
bulge as he gives a constant look.
There's a guy who's passing by by putting headphones and ajay and other guy dialogues
will be fade off as it'll be
perceived as music guy's pov.
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road meeda athani book ani gurthostundi... motham rapper theesi unna chote book
open chesi chaduthuntadu... interesting ga anipinchi... alane table mundhu kurchoni...
book chadavadam start chesthadu.
Night ipothundi. venu call chesthadu kaani asalu chudadu. Phone silent lo untundi bed
meeda ne... Akkade table meeda last page chadivi padkuntadu.
FADE OUT.
10.
FADE IN:
Bag ala padi undi, book bayataki untundi... suddenly walked towards the railing...
Character guy sat right beside him.. aah pakkane book untundi...
CHARACTER_G
UY (smiles...)
Inkokari gurinchi alochinchadam aape
varaku...
(shook his head)
evvaru happy ga undaleru...
Ajay.. putting his hands on railing... pulling it as if he's gonna take it out...
CHARACTER_GUY
(CONT'D) vaallu happy ga unnarani elaa
antunnav?
AJAY
Chusthene telusthundi...
AJA
Y Nakela tel----
He feels as if he's caught and turns his face off... character guy smiles...
There's a change in ajay's expression... he couldnt take that tried to defense him from that
moment...
AJAY (CONT'D)
Ikkada prblm... relation perutho
katteyadam.
Ajay lost in thoughts... character walks toward ajay... backround guy taking photos
venu atu veltu ajay ni chusthadu.. Drives towards him... ajay lost in thoughts... Ajay
AJAY
Adi... book chaduthunte late---
(ajay remembers, he has to
return that book)
Aah book manadeggare---
(i.v ^^ the above line...)
remembered...
VEN
U
Aaah aah avnu... daddy gaadu...
Ajay nods...
AJAY
Papam ra, book important ani
annadu... chaah!
(feels bad...)
VEN
U
Return Iddam ante ekkada untado
kuda telidu...
Ajay walking away...
VENU (CONT'D)
Ekkadki ajay?
AJAY
Athanni aapina chote wait
chestha...
VEN
U
Entha sepu ani wait chesthv ra?
AJAY
Oche daaka
Ram looks at them... reminds of his love's words about her father regarding that book
is taken from his personal collection...
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The same evening, Character guy's story echoing... venu is calling but he couldnt hear
as he's staring at something...
15.
VEN
U
Ajay... ninne ra... asalosthado
raado kuda telvanodi kosm entha
sepu wait chesthm ra?
CHARACTER_GU
Y
neeku nachani color rainbow lo
undani theeseyalev kada? Adi alaa
untene rainbow avthundi...
CHARACTER_GUY
(CONT'D) manaki istminavi inkokari kosam
odleyadam ante... aah rainbow lo okko color
theeseyadame...
AJAY
manam happy ga lenappudu, mana
vallani ina happy ga unchali---
CHARACTER_G
UY (smiles)
Oka deepame inko deepaanni veligisthundani
chinnapudu vine untav...
He stopped exactly where ajay and venu were there... breathing heavily...
kind of disappointment... he sat over there... breathing heavily... doesnt know what
to do... sweat all over...
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17.
AJAY
(closed his eyes...)
Job maneddham anukuntunna nanna?
AJAY'S FATHER
emindi ra?
AJAY
satisfaction ledu nanna... photography
side veltha..
AJAY'S FATHER
Malli adguthunna... atu side velthe
nilabadathavani enti nammakam?
AJAY
Manchina chedina, naku nachina
field lo work chesthe happy ga unta
anpistundi nanna...
Ajay is feeling so happy... corner nundi mellaga center ki osthadu... facing off the
screen... smiling face for the first time...
Beside him his bag and book inside it, he holds it... smiles... looks around and there are 2
guys who used to take selfie holding pollution board(like symbol)... they are taking
photos, looking for someone to take photos of them...
Saw them smiling at them, been to them took their camera... asks them to share that
picture...
AJAY
Aah pic naaku share chesthara?
They smiled at him and ajay did the same nods and as he walks... something popped
up... called venu... venu came to that place...
VEN
U
Enti ra urgent ga rammanv?
AJAY
Aah book athanu ekkada untado
gurthochindi ra...
VEN
U
Ekkada ra?
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Ajay looks all around... ram is right behind them, in the park...
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21.
Ajay and venu walks in... ajay going towards ram and venu signals that he's gonna
take a walk...
Ram saw him casually, doesnt react much.. looked at him again... he tried to talk but
his loved is calling... he had cut the call...
AJAY (CONT'D)
sorry bro...
Doesnt react... looks at him in a relaxed position... ajay kept that book aside... looking
at him...
RA
M
etla react avvalo ardm ithale
bhayya! ippudu nu ravadm inkchm
late ithe na love---
(shakes his head...)
AJAY Seriously
sorry bro...
Ram looks away...
AJAY (CONT'D)
Eee book neku evaricharu bro?
RA
M
Same problm enti bhayya?
AJAY
Ade career prblm huh? Intlo no
anadam....
Ram turns his face, looking away from ajay... He changed his way of looking and ajay
takes it as a yes...
AJAY (CONT'D)
(smiles...)
Problems kuda update avthunnayi... Inthaku
mundhu love problem undedhi.. ippudu career...
Ajay looks at him..
AJAY (CONT'D)
anukunnadi avvalekapothunm, manalni
evaru ardm cheskotledu ani...
(nods and looks forward)
ippudu nu unna mindstate lo nenu 2
years nundi unna bro...
a call...
RA
M
Book chaduthunna, anduke cut
chesanee...
(snaps a photo of him with
book...)
Kavalante chudu....
character guy is walking with ajay... as ajay goes.. ram took that book into his hands.. then
a cloned copy of character
guy will be going with ajay and one goes to the ram after he touching the book and sat
with the alone guy on the bench...
AJAY
book chadhuthadantava?
23.
CHARACTER_GU
Y
a hope lenappudu.. edoka point lo
dennoka danni nammali...
CHARACTER_G
UY (version 1)
Mammalni book lo matrame chuse vaallaki
adi kaavali...
(poins head)
ikkada petkune vaallaki adi
avasaram ledhu...
(version 2)
andaru book chadviesaka vaalla rack
lo petkuntaru .. chaala thakkuva
mandi vaalla memory lo
petkuntaru...
Ajay running back to ram... back to the ram... asked him to give his book once.. ajay
holding the book in his hand... kind of hug... the ram is shocked.. just stares at ajay...
ajay is feeling that he's hugging that character as if he's a real person...
THE END