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    Year 12 Film Pitch Feedback Group 1

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    This document provides feedback on a film pitch presented to a class. It addresses the context, genre, themes, and target audience of the pitched film. It also evaluates the opening sequence description and whether it effectively sets up the story and introduces characters. Practical production aspects like actors, locations, and budget are discussed. The presentation of the pitch is assessed for teamwork, understanding of film theory, and whether the pitched idea meets the assignment requirements. The feedback concludes with an overall assessment of whether the film idea is developed enough to be "greenlit" or if a re-pitch is required.

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    This document provides feedback on a film pitch presented to a class. It addresses the context, genre, themes, and target audience of the pitched film. It also evaluates the opening sequence description and whether it effectively sets up the story and introduces characters. Practical production aspects like actors, locations, and budget are discussed. The presentation of the pitch is assessed for teamwork, understanding of film theory, and whether the pitched idea meets the assignment requirements. The feedback concludes with an overall assessment of whether the film idea is developed enough to be "greenlit" or if a re-pitch is required.

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    This document provides feedback on a film pitch presented to a class. It addresses the context, genre, themes, and target audience of the pitched film. It also evaluates the opening sequence description and whether it effectively sets up the story and introduces characters. Practical production aspects like actors, locations, and budget are discussed. The presentation of the pitch is assessed for teamwork, understanding of film theory, and whether the pitched idea meets the assignment requirements. The feedback concludes with an overall assessment of whether the film idea is developed enough to be "greenlit" or if a re-pitch is required.

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    This document provides feedback on a film pitch presented to a class. It addresses the context, genre, themes, and target audience of the pitched film. It also evaluates the opening sequence description and whether it effectively sets up the story and introduces characters. Practical production aspects like actors, locations, and budget are discussed. The presentation of the pitch is assessed for teamwork, understanding of film theory, and whether the pitched idea meets the assignment requirements. The feedback concludes with an overall assessment of whether the film idea is developed enough to be "greenlit" or if a re-pitch is required.

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