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Personal Statement FINAL10
Personal Statement FINAL10
Personal Statement FINAL10
Overview
Purpose of statement in UC admissions
Purpose of the
Personal Statement
process
Opportunity to provide information that
The Instructions
Three rationale statements and
questions (prompts)
Your World
Potential to contribute
Word limits
Two Responses: 1000 word maximum
Recommended minimum of 350 words
The Prompts
Rationale statement: provides context
Prompt #1
Question:
[Freshman Applicants] Describe the world you come
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Necessary Skills
Think critically: even though students will
Important Strategies
Think like an admissions reader
Choose the extended prompt strategically
Know the difference between a short-
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writer
Understand the reading and writing tasks of the
personal statement
Use a writing process
Obtain appropriate feedback
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the application
Determine the extended-response
question
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applications content
Helps students recognize personal and
does it say?
Level two: What does
it mean?
Level three:
Why/how does it
matter?
Answers to L1
questions provide
details in paragraphs
Answers to L2
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Question/Topic/Thesis Example
Our question: How have you taken
advantage of the educational
opportunities you have had to prepare
for college?
Your topic: The role of Pre-College
Academy in academic preparation
Your thesis: Asserts why and
how PCA was a significant
preparation experience
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Short-Answer Strategies
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Readers Want
Responses that get right to the point
Specific, concrete examples and language
Adherence to word restrictions
Responses that complete the application
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background
information
Understand meaning
of key words
sentence advances
the argument
Avoid a collection of
facts or examples
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Extended-Response
Strategies
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Readers Want
Organization and clarity, provided by a
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Thesis Statements
Concession (optional)
Assertion
The argument
This
Reasons
The synthesis of
supporting points
Because
Significance
argument; implications
As a result
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Writing Process
Brainstorm using levels of questions
Draft
Get feedback give readers at least a
week to respond
Revise for organization, clarity and
meaning
Proofread
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Students at www.ucgateways.org
Six lessons that guide students through
on task
Developed by EAOP admissions preparation
specialists
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