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GSSE: Scientific Writing 1: Scientific Language and Readerships
GSSE: Scientific Writing 1: Scientific Language and Readerships
Scientific Language
and Readerships
Robert Blake
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Outline of Session 1: Scientific Language & Readerships
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1. Scientific Language and Readerships- Introduction
setting?
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1 Scientific language and readerships-
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Task: Analysing scientific writing
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ANALYSIS OF THE 6 EXCERPTS *
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Analysing scientific writing: excerpt 1
Human breast tumours are diverse in their natural history and in their
responsiveness to treatments. Variation in transcriptional programs accounts for
much of the biological diversity of human cells and tumours. In each cell, signal
transduction and regulatory systems transduce information from the cell's
identity to its environmental status, thereby controlling the level of expression of
every gene in the genome. Here we have characterized variation in gene
expression patterns in a set of 65 surgical specimens of human breast tumours
from 42 different individuals, using complementary DNA microarrays representing
8,102 human genes. These patterns provided a distinctive molecular portrait of
each tumour. Twenty of the tumours were sampled twice, before and after a 16-
week course of doxorubicin chemotherapy, and two tumours were paired with a
lymph node metastasis from the same patient. Gene expression patterns in two
tumour samples from the same individual were almost always more similar to
each other than either was to any other sample. Sets of co-expressed genes were
identified for which variation in messenger RNA levels could be related to
specific features of physiological variation. The tumours could be classified into
subtypes distinguished by pervasive differences in their gene expression patterns.
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Analysing scientific writing: excerpt 2
HIV viruses are found in most body fluids, so this is where the danger of
infection arises, almost any exchange will transfer some HIV virus. It is
because of this that one of the first groups to be hit were haemophiliacs
who receive factor VIII contaminated with HIV. In France 1500 were
infected with HIV this way an 256 of them have died of AIDS so far.
But in the spring of 1989, the occupants of Cambridge University's Cavendish Laboratory
were jolted from their deep deliberations on both cosmos and currants. The atmosphere
glowed with speculation about a trio of researchers who had been spotted in hushed
conversation. Rumours abounded of secret experiments, and there were ever-so-slightly
envious whispers about the "P" word - patent. Something extraordinary seemed to have
happened, and the question on everyone's lips was - what have they found?
6.7 Summary
At the end of this chapter the following conclusions are made.
· It is possible to construct trellis structures to meet the
requirements in a quasi-synchronous adder
channel. These trellises are modified versions of the synchronous cases
and have improved the reliability of composite codewords.
· A price paid for the improvement of the individual user is a
reduction in the sum rate.
In an M-choose T scenario, the identification process based on metric
accumulation is shown to be reliable when using the modified decoders
catering for each quasi-synchronous set
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ANALYSIS OF THE 6 EXCERPTS**
PASSAGE ACCEPTABLE AS SCIENTIFIC WRITING IN AN SOURCE
ACADEMIC SETTING + REASON WHY/WHY NOT
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Analysing scientific writing: 2nd task
Using the passages that you judge to be acceptable in
academic scientific writing and, perhaps those passages
that are for contrast, can you now identify some of the
characteristics of scientific writing? Use the following
headings & table in slide 18
• organisation
• style
• vocabulary and grammar
• visual presentation
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CHARACTERISTICS OF SCIENTIFIC WRITING
ORGANISATION STYLE VOCABULARY &
GRAMMAR
GRAPHICAL PRESENTATION
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Expectations Of Readership
• Precise
• Explicit
• Analytical and critical
• Explanatory
• Objective
• Impartial
• Concise
• Responsible [claims carefully made, supported where
possible & use of sources acknowledged]
• Follows established conventions
Above list adapted from Gillett [1999-2004] Features of academic writing UEFAP
http://www.uefap.co.uk/writing/writfram.htm
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Organisation
• Structured for easy access to information e.g. headings
& sub-headings; cohesive links across sentences e.g.
however, The first measurement.
• Headings
• Use of forecasting and signposting
• Importance of introductions, conclusions and transitions
• Field specific patterns [e.g. IMRaD]
• Matrix or hierarchical structure structures to organise
ideas
• Cross referencing in longer texts
• Paragraphs well structured [begin with topic sentences]
etc
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Style, Vocabulary & Grammar
FORMAL & OBJECTIVE STYLE
• 'I' or 'You‘ are avoided in most writing;
• Contracted verb forms avoided: can't, doesn’t: cannot, does not
• Formal rather than colloquial English; vague/imprecise words avoided:
stuff, things, loads, lots – materials, issues, significant number/ large
quantities
• Spoken negatives avoided: there are not many few; there is not much
little
• Attitudinal words are avoided in favour of objectivity: really, actually,
great, magnificently
• Word origin: Nouns & verbs with Latin/ Greek derivations are frequent. 2
part [phrasal] verbs- infrequent: look about, look into, look up, survey,
examine, consult 18
Style, Vocabulary & Grammar
VOCABULARY CHOICE:
• Precise & often abstract vocabulary: issues, values, materials,
specification
GRAMMAR:
• Fairly densely packed with information [particularly nouns, noun
groups/ nominalisation]. Avoidance of direct questions and standard
negatives
• Common use but not overuse of passive: ‘Two specimens were then
selected ..’ rather than ‘I then selected 2 samples …..’
• Complex sentence structure [with more than 1 clause] to relate
ideas and improve flow of ideas.
• Modals are important in making carefully weighted claims: can,
may, might etc
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Graphical Presentation
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Style, Grammar and Vocabulary In Scientific Writing
The use of personal pronouns, ‘I’ & particularly ‘you’, is rare in
scientific writing, where an objective or impersonal style is standard.
• Use of the passive is a common way to avoid using personal
pronouns. It’s discouraged in American academic writing, as the MS
Word grammar checker, if turned on, shows you. However, it’s
commonly used in British scientific writing.
• Overuse of the passive, can make writing heavy going for the reader.
Slides 25-8 show ways of writing in an objective or impersonal style.
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Writing in an Impersonal Scientific Style: The Passive
Modals [e.g. can, could, may might, will, would] have an important effect
on varying the strength of a claim you are making about your data:
– x can be characterised
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Choosing a scientific writing style
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Choosing a scientific writing style- Brown’s version
In the first experiment of the series using mice it was discovered that the
total removal of the adrenal glands effects reduction of aggressiveness
and that aggressiveness in adrenalectomized mice is restorable to the
level of intact mice by treatment with corticosterone. These results
point to the indispensability of the adrenals for the full expression of
aggression. Nevertheless, since adrenalectomy is followed by an increase
of adrenocorticotrophic hormone (ACTH), and since ACTH has been
reported [Brain 1972), to decrease the aggressiveness of intact mice, it is
possible that the effects of adrenalectomy on aggressiveness are a
function of the concurrent increased levels of ACTH. However high levels
of ACTH, in addition to causing increases in glucocorticoids (which
possibly accounts for the depression of aggression in intact mice by
ACTH), also result in decreased androgen levels. In view of the fact that
animals with low androgen levels are characterised by decreased
aggressiveness the possibility exists that adrenalectomy, rather than
affecting aggression directly, has the effect of reducing aggressiveness by
producing an ACTH- mediated condition of decreased androgen levels.
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Choosing a scientific writing style- Smith’s version
The first experiment in our series with mice showed that total
removal of the adrenal glands reduces aggressiveness . Moreover,
when treated with corticosterone, mice that had their adrenals
taken out became as aggressive as intact animals again. These
findings suggest that adrenals are necessary for animals to show full
aggressiveness.
But the removal of adrenals raises the levels of adrenocorticotrophic
hormone (ACTH) and Brain 1972 found that ACTH lowers the
aggressiveness of intact mice. Thus the reduction of aggressiveness
after this operation might be due to the higher levels of ACTH which
accompany it.
However, high levels of ACTH have two effects. First, the levels of
glucocorticoids rise, which might account for Brian’s results. Second
the levels of androgen fall. Since animals with low levels of androgen
are less aggressive, it is possible that removal of the adrenals
reduces aggressiveness only indirectly: by raising the levels of ACTH
it causes androgen levels to drop.
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Choosing a scientific writing style:
2 NO?: formal style; undeveloped introduction- too short, short undergrad LU essay
undeveloped paragraphs; clear argument; data/claims not
supported by references
3 YES: IMRaD structure. Follows typical pattern of Discussion Biomedical journal
sections; very formal; succinct, even dense with much specialist online
vocabulary. Well structured with v effective topic sentences;
claims cautiously expressed
4 NO : no underlying structure; no flow/cohesion, claims not Tabloid newspaper
identified, nor appropriately supported; narrative structure- e.g. Daily Mail
5 NO: narrative structure; direct speech- through quotation; not New Scientist
concise; very slow lead into topic; descriptive & informal article intro
language [many adjectives]
6 YES: succinct; formal style; specialist language; claims End of chapter
cautiously made summary in PhD
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