Professional Documents
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Keep It Short, Professional and Objective
Keep It Short, Professional and Objective
Keep It Short, Professional and Objective
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Do not use abbreviations or slang
• An email is not the same as texting. Don’t use abbreviations.
• Don’t use slang words when writing an email to a teacher,
official or someone older than you
• hey mrs. smith:
• i just cant get it 2gether 2 get all my stuf dun this week. Could
u cut me sum slack on the due date 4 tht essay?
• Keep it short and to the point
• Dear Mrs. Smith:
I would like to submit my assessment sheets on Monday as I will
be unable to hand it in on Friday.
• Don't leave out the message thread: When you reply to an
email, you must include the original mail in your reply, in other
words click 'Reply', instead of 'New Mail'.
• Add disclaimers to your emails: It is important to add
disclaimers to your internal and external mails, since this can
help protect your company from liability.
Do not use Capital Letters
Dear Mrs. Smith: I need to set up a convenient time to come talk to you after
class.
When your message is long
• Create an “elevator” summary.
• Provide a table of contents on the first screen of your email.
• If you require a response from the reader then be sure to request
that response in the first paragraph of your email.
• Create headings for each major section.
• An elevator summary should have all the main components of
the email.
“Our profit margin for the last quarter went down 5%. As a
result I am proposing budget adjustment for the following
areas…”
• Table of contents
“This email contains
A. Budget projections for the last quarter
B. Actual performance for the last quarter
C. Adjustment proposal
D. Projected profitability”
Writing a complaint
• You should briefly state the history of the problem to provide
context for your reader.
• Explain the attempts you made previously to resolve the
problem.
• Show why it is critical for the problem to be resolved by your
reader.
• Offer suggestions on ways you think it can be resolved or how
you are willing to help in the matter.
Poor Emails
• No subject
Maintain Consistency in subjects
Good Emails
Use Smart Subject Lines
• Good Subject Line Examples
FYI ONLY: Meeting minutes from 3/14 discussion
WSR: Joe Smith – Operations WW17
DISTRIBUTE: Program POR updated & related information
AGENDA: Staff meeting Thurs 3/12 10:00 pm
Mary: I will attend the WW FTF & present summary. (EOM)
• Poor Subject Line Examples
Weekly Minutes
Daily Report
Here are the URLs
Re: presentation
(blank subject line)
Unrelated subject line – sending an email with an old subject line that does not relate to this message
When email wont work
• There are times when you need to take
your discussion out of the virtual
world and make a phone call.
Sincerely,