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Class Led

Discussion 4/9

Eryn, Molly, Andrew, Emily, and Sam


Define Revision

What is the point of it?

When is it necessary?

How does it happen?

What does it involve?


Writing Activity
● Take 5 minutes to write about the topic given to you.
● Stay focused on the topic. Take the claim even if you don’t
usually agree with it.
● ONLY RULES
○ Don’t share your claim with anyone else
○ Style, strategy, structure is all up to you
○ Don’t stop writing
○ No rereading
○ No going back and “fixing” any writing
○ Just focus your writing on it’s purpose and let the ideas
and writing flow
○ You want to get as much writing done to support your
topic within the time frame
Reading Activity

● After receiving someone else’s paper, read the first


page/piece of writing.
● Once reading it through, write a one sentence overview
of what you believed was the purpose of the piece.
● Flip over the paper.
● Read the second page/piece of writing.
● After reading that, write a new one sentence overview
of the purpose of the second piece of writing.
● KEY: You’re trying to determine the original one
sentence claim that the author wrote about.
Were the two sentences that you wrote close to the
author’s original claim?

Were they way off?

Was one closer than the other?


Common Misconceptions about Revision

● Revision should occur with each draft crafted,


including the first draft.
● It’s okay to leave some spots unfinished and ask
the person for advice about how to proceed.
● If you don’t agree with the advice or suggestions
from the revisions, just ignore them.
● Your paper is done after you finish revising.
● Revising is correcting.
Article Discussion

From the reading assigned for today, what were


some major themes or ideas that you noticed?

Do you agree that revision is a constant process or


a separate step?

Anything about the article that was surprising?

Do last-minute “2 am” essays still contain revisions?

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