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Accurate Written Discourse: Sentences and Paragraphs
Accurate Written Discourse: Sentences and Paragraphs
Discourse: Sentences
and Paragraphs
CONCISENESS avoids…
Four key principles of good writing 1. wordiness
2. redundancy and
3. padding
FORCEFULNESS uses…
1. economical sentence
2. periodic sentence and
3. of parallelism and balanced
structure
1. Careful review of writing
mechanics
2. subject-verb concordance
Four key principles of good writing
3. agreement of pronoun and
its antecedent
4. grammatical conventions
REFINEMENT is…
1. Careful review for
conciseness, forcefulness and
correctness
Conciseness is possible
by deleting unnecessary
qualifiers and eliminating
‘weasel words’ and make
your writing short by
avoiding redundancy and
getting rid of padding.
Conciseness
Wordy: The actor, who was very nasty, stole the scene.
Concise: The nasty actor stole the scene.
Tip 5: Use the active voice since more words are
required to be written in the passive voice.
Pesirla, Angel O., Edwin A. Pilapil, etc. Writing Prowess across the Disciplines.
Malabon City, Philippines: Mutya Publishing House Inc., 2013.