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Business Communications PPT Slides
Business Communications PPT Slides
• Acceptable tutoring:
• Comments designed to help you improve your work
• Cheating
• Edits or rewrites by someone other than you
Who’s sorry now?
5 R’s for an effective apology
• Recognition: acknowledge the specific offence
• Responsibility: accept personal responsibility without
excuses
• Remorse: “I apologize” “I am sorry”
• Restitution: here’s what I’m going to do about it,
specifically
• Repeating: I promise it won’t happen again
BUS 360W
9 Medieval Let it be hereafter promulgated that said missive has been gazetted
and cognizance raised pursuant to its substance.
10 Biblical I receiveth unto me thy epistle, and its wisdom escapeth me not.
Informality in the locker room
Slangy:
Come on guys, this locker room sucks! It’s getting so you can’t see the
floor, and the place stinks!
The Maintenance Department is freaking out, and if we don’t get our act
together, I won’t be surprised if management does a number on us and
closes the joint. So don’t trash it—stash it or take it home and wash it!
Informal:
We’re lucky to have these excellent new facilities, but we risk losing them if
we don’t take care of them.
We’ve been creating extra work for the Maintenance Department by leaving
clothes and equipment lying around.
Let’s keep our changing room respectable so we don’t lose our privileges.
Trying to impress with formality
Stuffy:
Informal:
Mass opiate
"The impersonal passive voice [is] an opiate that cancels
responsibility, hides identity, and numbs the reader."
Sheridan Baker, "Scholarly Style, or the Lack Thereof" (1956), in Perspectives on Style 64, 66 (Frederick Candelaria
ed., 1968)
• Active
o He killed Lennon.
o We recommend canceling.
• Passive
o Lennon was killed by him.
o Canceling is recommended.
Action? Sometimes
• Active clauses: the subject (responsible party) often does
something
Pro-choice
Active benefits
• Identifies responsible party to ensure transparency and
accountability. Readers don’t have to guess
• Creates a more direct message, often shorter
• Focuses the picture for readers
• Matches how people think and perceive
• Often sounds better
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Passive problems
• Imprecise when by phrase missing (no
transparency/accountability): power will be supplied