PLANNING ESSAYS

AND PRESENTATIONS
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Two important components in writing

•Thesis statement

•Outline
Thesis statement
•Overall idea or argument of
your paper
Thesis statement
•Must have 3 supporting points
•Declarative form
•The ASEAN region is a dynamic
system because it capitalizes on
cultural diversity, rich resources and a
variety of perspectives.
QUIZ
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Craft a suitable thesis statement given the topics and
possible supporting points.
1. Recyclable bags – Problematic Production – Added Resources
Needed – Increased Cost

2. Political Dynasties – Stifle Development – Monopolizes

Resources – Limits People’s Choices

3. Cycling – Cheap Method of Travel – Sustainable Transport –

Health Benefits
JUST A MINUTE…
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Comparison of
Thesis statement Topic sentence
•Main idea of an •Main idea for a
essay paragraph
•Has at least two •Has one supporting
supporting points point
QUIZ 2
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Read the following statements and write ThS if the sentence
is a thesis statement and ToS if the sentence is a topic
sentence.

1.Automated elections should be improved to

minimize fraud, facilitate faster turnout, and
maximize voter participation.
2.The lakes of Laguna is a grand spectacle that is
worth seeing.
3.Creating comics undergoes several steps.
4. Despite some risks, online businesses can be
a sustainable model for doing business since
it minimizes operating costs and provides
greater option for consumers.
5. Writing requires careful planning.
DISCUSS..
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A good thesis statement has several
qualities:
•Framed as a declarative
statement
• NO: What is plagiarism?

• YES: Plagiarism can be explained from cultural perspective

and socio-political perspectives.
A good thesis statement has several
qualities:
•Focused
• NO: An effective local government unit should have good
communication facilities and efficient resource management
programs since it will be beneficial for its citizens
• YES: Effective dissemination of information and efficient resource
management are indicators of effective local governance.
A good thesis statement has several
qualities:
•Has clear boundaries
• NO: Guitar playing skills can be improved if the player is
dedicated and there are sessions devoted to technique and
investments on good equipment must be considered since it will
be influential in performing in front of an audience.
• YES: Excellent guitar playing requires countless hours of
practice, strategic decision in purchasing equipment, and
tireless dedication.
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•Read the following excerpts from
essays and identify the thesis
statement. Then with the criteria
previously discussed, decide if it is a
good thesis statement or not. Justify
your answer.
1. A person who organizes, manages and assumes the risks of an enterprise is called
an entrepreneur. They start a business, willing to take risks in order to make money
and they are the ones involved in entrepreneurship. Entrepreneurship started as early
as 17,000 B.C.E. where the first known instance of humans trading comes from New
Guinea when locals exchanged obsidian used to make hunting arrowheads for other
needed goods. The original entrepreneurs were traders and merchants until the
development of the market system and the invention of money. In modern society,
entrepreneurship continues to become a major factor affecting our economy since
every organization had an entrepreneurial beginning. As modern society continues to
develop, the range of entrepreneurship also increased as it was already possible to
have young entrepreneurs. Furthermore, students are already studying
entrepreneurship that can help them determine the importance and benefits of being
involved in business. The essay aims to evaluate the importance of being into business
even in such a young age and its benefits to graduating students (Chico, 2014).
2. Batman. Captain America. Superman. Wonder Woman. These are famous
superheroes that have kept their worlds safe, but they have also helped our
world. The idea of superheroes has greatly benefited society by giving them
creativity, confidence, and courage. Children usually dress up as superheroes
during Halloween, or even on a regular basis. They do this not simply because
they find their costumes, gadgets, and superpowers cool, but also because they
look up to these superheroes as role models. There must be something more
than gadgets for these kids to admire superheroes and not supervillains. The
reason is because these superheroes are good. Not only do they fight the bad
guys, but they also have the capability of bringing out the best of us. This essay
will discuss the history of superheroes, the difference between superheroes and
other fictional characters, and how all these things have positively affected
society (Suarez, 2012).