IN ELT CLASSROOMS [Advanced discourse analysis] Mohammad Qushoy 0201618014 Pascasarjana Universitas Negeri Semarang This Critical Review consists of: • Introduction • Summary of the research article • The analysis • Positive points of the Article • The concerns • The conclusion Introduction The Journal: Journal of Academic and Applied Studies Vol. 1 (2) July 2011, pp. 25-32. Available online @ www.academians.org The Article Interpersonal Metafunction of Gender Talk in ELT Classrooms. The authors Seyed Mahdi Araghi and Kamal Shayeghi. Department of ELT and General Linguistics. Ahar branch. Islamic Azad University. Ahar. Iran. Corresponding Author: kamalshayegh@yahoo.com Summary of the Article Bakcground of the study Gender variant has less been concerned in language studies. Some of the performed researches are related to language teaching in bilingual areas. The different kinds of clausal structure (declarative, integrative, imperative, and Exclamative) used by males and females in ELT classroom are studied on the basis of Hallidayian systemic Functional grammar from interpersonal metafunction perspective to show the way which meaning is exchanged between interlocutors. Exchange among students of ELT classes with different genders in bilingual context of situation causing high level of language proficiency by reorganizing different types of clausal structures. Objectives of the research The objective of their study was to determine different clausal structure such as Declaratives, Integratives, Imperatives, and Exclamatives used by interlocutors with different gender in bilingual classroom. Theoretical Framework • Halliday’s systemic functional grammar (1985:11) considers text analysis as discourse one and states that during a conversation, speaker may give something to addressee or ask something from him. • Halliday’s two speech acts of giving and demanding, and four speech functions called offer, demand, information and question. • Clausal Structures expressed through Declarative, Integrative, Imperative, and Exclamatives (Halliday, 1985) • Mood is composed of functional elements of subject and finite in which subject approves or disapproves argument whereas finite shows primary tense and aspect. (Halliday,1985) • Eggins (2004:144) states using language, one of the processes occurred in conversation is creating communication among people speaking or may speak in the next turn-taking. Previous Research • Mehrabi (2006) studies the role of gender in interpretation of silence in discourse. This research shows whether the gender of conversing people and the gender of the population employed in the research has any effect on interpretation of silence or not. • Dasturi and Bastani (2007: 5-30) study the effect of gender on discourse in two contemporary translations of Quran, showing the meaning system that the democratic system has created. • Allaei et al (2010: 211-228) have studied exchange of meaning in humanity science textbooks on the base of Hallidayian systemic functional grammar from the viewpoint of interpersonal metafunction. Research Methodology They used oral form of teacher-students interaction in the classroom context as its corpus. The oral conversation between students and teacher was taken from eight randomly different classrooms since there were two populations in the study. Each population consisted of four classes of male and female students. The recorded and transcribed conversation in the study resulted to 3288 clauses. The research result and discussion Mood of most clauses by males and females in classroom discourse are declarative and dominant Mood is declarative of third person singular simple present tense.
In contrast, the study showed both genders have used
less integrative in their conversation.
Imperatives were used with low frequency in classroom
discourse and both genders did not used any exclamatives in their conversation. In Declaratives, speakers intend to express information to the addressee. In fact exchange process of meaning in this kind of clauses is one-sided and in its least active form. In Integratives, the route of interaction is two-sided and active. In Integratives, addressee can refer to his mind, providing an answer to the question or express his unawareness on it. In interaction between teacher and student in this research, the process of exchange is one-sided in both genders, in which speakers just provide new information. Conclusion of the research Reconstructing clausal structures used by different genders in ELT classrooms may result into students’ high language proficiency in bilingual context of situation. That is, using Integratives for declaratives may make interlocutors take part much more in classroom discourse, causing interpersonal meaning to transfer more.
Different number of clause that produced by both genders
related to social status and its effect on speech production in the context of class. For example, males have higher social and occupational position, while employed in low ranked position in the society. Consequently, this ends to unequal speech production which is overtly observed in the context of class. The Evaluation The positive points of the research article 1. The result of the study has achieved the purpose or objective of the study in which to determine the different clausal structures used by different genders in bilingual classroom. 2. This is a good article in terms that it can meet all aspect of scientific journal; started from the abstract to the conclusion. They are presented in the article yet they are not completely detailed. 3. It clearly states the important of the research and the description of it is clear, straightforward, and easy to follow. 4. The article presents some previous researches related the topic to support the reason why they took interpersonal metafunction as their main topic. Accordingly, this can give appropriate background knowledge to the reader regarding the topic being investigated. Moreover, it makes a good and clear communication of the research finding so that it develops reader’s understanding. 5. The article is original and give an interesting topic. The concerns of the article 1. Research method and research question are not clearly stated in the article. The writers don’t mention the approach they used in the study and they don’t present how they collect and analyze the data. 2. The writer don’t display how they find the result after they analyze the data. 3. They don’t explain about the use of tense and pronoun more, since the results show that third person simple present tense is dominant structures used in the conversation. 4. Inadequate underpinning theories presented in the article, for example the writers don’t presented about the function of Mood and Modality because it is important element in analyzing interpersonal metafunction. 5. The terms Declarative, Integrative, Imperative, and Exclamative are also presented inadequately. It should be more detailed explanation. 6. They don’t give explanation about terms interpersonal metafunction and gender talk itself, and also they don’t mention what kind of conversation happen in the classrooms. 7. They have met the purpose of their study, but unfortunately, they give lack evidence in terms of the example or sentences produced by students to support their argument. 8. Regarding the conclusion, the writers don’t give enough explanations about the reasons why males produced higher number clauses. 9. It would be better if the writers make every parts of article in separated and different paragraphs. 10. They should give suggestion and recommendation for the implication in regards interpersonal metafunction in classroom especially through conversation. Interpersonal Metafunction
Interpersonal metafunction uses language to encode
interaction and to show how defensible or binding we find our proposition or proposal. (Butt, et al,1995:13) Interpersonal Metafunction mainly focuses on the relation between the role of speakers and the role of audience, mood and modality (Halliday, 2009). In Interpersonal metafunction analysis, sentence is considered as a piece of interaction between the speaker and listener. (Halliday&Hasan: 1985). Conclusion The study from Araghi and Shayeghi in term of interpersonal metafunction related to variant genders is really interesting topic. Especially, how they focus on how different genders produce language in Classroom. In my opinion it should have more careful and further analysis in what way interpersonal metafunction can causing high level of proficiency. For next researcher, it also necessary to analyze not only between teacher and students, but also the conversation among students because it must be different when students talk to teacher and when they talk to their friends. There is a hole created by the writers because they don’t describe how the gender talk reflects in the article, so they necessarily should present about this in their article. Finally, I agree that the use of varieties of clausal structure will enhance the conversation in the classroom. THANK YOU