Editing&Summary

Let’s find faults! 一起来找茬！

To begin with, why don't you toeat
eat more vegetables? The advantage of eat
eating

vegetables is that it can give you fewer calories and more nutrition. In
addition, it might be a good idea toexercise
exercise regularly such as do
doing

yoga,swimming and running. The reason why you should do so is that

exercise can help you sweat and burn fat. Besides, what about togoing
going to
professional hospital? It is a good way for you to ask for advice
advices from
professioanl doctors according to your physical condition.
To begin with, why don't you eat more vegetables? The advantage of
eating vegetables is that it can give you fewer calories and more nutrition.
In addition, it might be a good idea to exercise regularly such as doing
yoga, swimming and running. The reason why you should do so is that
exercise can help you sweat and burn fat. Besides,what about going to a
professional hospital? It is a good way for you to ask advice from
professional doctors according to your physical condition.
 Summary
Why don’t you+do...? The advantage of doing so is that...
It might be a good idea+to do... The reason why you should do so is that...
What about+doing...? It is a good way for sb. to do...
 Homework
Please write a letter of advice to your friends
on how to communicate with parents with
sentence patterns we learned today in 80
words.