Parents are responsible for their kids’ mental health.

Do
you agree or disagree?
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According to Some modern psychological theories childhood
experiences play an important role in shaping our lives.Parents
play a substantial role in shaping their child's mental health.
There are many cases in which kids are mentally affected by parents as well as
their own thoughts. Many people think that parents are not responsible for their
child's mental health because kids take pressure on their own but parents are
responsible because of their personal issues and study pressure on them.Kids
own thinking affects their mental health.
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Kids' own thoughts affect them mentally. Firstly, kids

think deeply about minor issues. They get mentally ill
because they even examine a positive thing in a
negative way. Secondly, kids take personal issues
with others to heart. Thinking and thinking makes
them mentally ill. Although, they take pressure on
their own parents personal issues affect them as well.
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Parents' personal issues affect kids' mental health. Firstly, kids
demand a peaceful environment. Parents fighting in front of them
will definitely affect them. They start to predict bad things and make
themselves mentally ill. Secondly, when situations get worse
between parents both convince their kids against each other. Kids
are too young for this. Family problems make them ill. In addition to
personal issues of parents they impose study pressure on them.
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Study pressure on kids makes them mentally ill. Firstly, kids
are too young for the syllabus they are given. It seems they
are carrying camping stuff in their bags. They get assaulted
by parents on minor study issues. Getting lower grades
forces them to predict bad situations. This ultimately makes
them ill. Secondly, they get assaulted when they need their
parents' support. Kids want their parents to motivate them
on getting low grades. They get ill as they are assaulted in
unexpected situations.
In conclusion kid are mentally affected by
their negative mind but parents also make
them ill by torture them on studies and family
problems. Kids take family problems and
assaulting seriously. Kids are also
lighthearted and take small things to heart.
I think parents should motivate them on
studies issues rather than assaulting them
and making them their friends and solving
their issues.