Professional Documents
Culture Documents
CH 07
CH 07
Persuasive Messages
|
| Ch. 7±1
^riting Plan for a
Persuasive Request
pening
tain the reader¶s attention and interest.
Body
Explain logically and concisely the purpose
of your request.
Reduce resistance with counterarguments;
esta lish credi ility.
|
| Ch. 7±2
^riting Plan for a
Persuasive Request
Closing
Ask for a particular action.
Make it easy to respond.
Show courtesy and respect.
|
| Ch. 7±3
Ñips for Complaints
|
| Ch. 7±4
Ñips for Complaints
|
| Ch. 7±5
Ñips for Complaints
|
| Ch. 7±6
*neffective Persuasive
Request Letter
Mr. John M. Watson
Retail Credit Department
Union National Bank
P. O. Box 2051
Little Rock, AR 72203
|
| Ch. 7±7
*neffective Persuasive
Request Letter
How can we be charged with "over-the-limit" charges when nearly
every one of the charges was approved? We don't keep a running
record of our Visa account and all our credit purchases on it, so we
did not know that we were close to the limit.
|
| Ch. 7±8
*neffective Persuasive
Request Letter
It seems to me that your approval system is at fault here.
And why aren't new cardholders informed of your rules? The
charges we made exceeding the limit were clearly unintentional.
Furthermore, our actions were made on the basis of misinformation
and errors on the part of your credit processors.
Angrily yours,
|
| Ch. 7±9
*neffective Persuasive
Request Letter
Discussion:
1. Does the opening o tain the reader's attention
in a positive manner?
2. Why does the writer think that the $120 penalty
is unreasona le? Does the writer offer
convincing reasons? Are they logically
presented?
3. Does the writer try to lame the ank for the
penalty?
|
| Ch. 7±10
*neffective Persuasive
Request Letter
Discussion:
4. What action does the writer seek?
5. Is that action clearly stated?
6. Does the letter show courtesy and respect?
7. How would you feel if you were the receiver?
|
| Ch. 7±11
*mproved Persuasive
Request Letter
|
| Ch. 7±12
*mproved Persuasive
Request Letter
small purchases. Ten of these purchases were given telephone
approval. When we received our last statement, a copy of which is
enclosed, we were surprised to see that we were charged $10
each for these purchases because our account was over our limit.
The total charge was $120.
Of course, we should have been more aware of our limit and the
number of charges that we were making against our account. We
assumed, however, that if our purchases received telephone
approval from your credit processors, we were still within our credit
limit.
|
| Ch. 7±13
*mproved Persuasive
Request Letter
Please examine our account, Mr. Watson, and reconsider this
penalty. Since we have never exceeded our credit limit in the past
and since we had received telephone approval for most of the
charges in question, we feel that the $120 charge should be
removed.
Sincerely,
|
| Ch. 7±14
>ood and Bad Openings for
Persuasive Requests
Which of the following openings are
effective?
1. About 15 months ago your smooth-talking
salesperson seduced us into buying your Model RX
copier, which has been nothing but trouble ever
since.
2. If you will check your records, you will undoubtedly
discover that we first obtained our model RX copier
15 months ago. It was installed in our Legal
Department.
|
| Ch. 7±15
>ood and Bad Openings for
Persuasive Requests
Which of the following openings are
effective?
u. When we purchased our Model RX copier 15 months
ago, we had high expectations for its performance.
4. We need a speaker for our graduation ceremony, and
your name was suggested.
5. Would you be able to speak at our graduation
ceremony on June 7?
|
| Ch. 7±16
>ood and Bad Openings for
Persuasive Requests
Which of the following openings are
effective?
-. We realize that you are an extremely busy individual
and that you must be booked up months in advance,
but would it be possible for you to speak at our
graduation ceremony on June 7?
7. You were voted by our students as the speaker they
would most like to hear at graduation on June 7.
|
| Ch. 7±17
*neffective Favor Request
|
| Ch. 7±18
*neffective Favor Request
15,000 students (and most are registered voters in your district) will
be attending this function where three major speakers have been
invited.
|
| Ch. 7±19
*neffective Favor Request
Sincerely,
|
| Ch. 7±20
*neffective Favor Request
|
| Ch. 7±21
*neffective Favor Request
|
| Ch. 7±23
*mproved Favor Request
|
| Ch. 7±24
*mproved Favor Request
Cordially,
|
| Ch. 7±25
^riting Plan for a Sales Letter
pening
Capture the attention of the reader.
Body
Emphasize a central selling point.
Appeal to the needs of the reader.
Create a desire for the product.
Introduce the price strategically.
|
| Ch. 7±26
^riting Plan for a Sales Letter
Closing
Stimulate the reader to act.
|
| Ch. 7±27
`ttention->etters for Sales Letters
1. ffer
Ëollow my entry instructions, and you
could be the sole winner of ONE
MILLION DOLLARS!
2. Product Feature
Six Omaha steak filets from fine, corn-fed
beef can be yours for only $-2.95.
|
| Ch. 7±28
`ttention->etters for Sales Letters
3. Question
Do you yearn for an honest, fulfilling
relationship?
4. Startling Statement
Drunk drivers injure or cripple more than
500,000 victims every year!
|
| Ch. 7±29
`ttention->etters for Sales Letters
5. Story
Ñommy G. doesn't live in a neighborhood
like yours. He has grown up in a
neighborhood with dirty alleyways and drug
dealers. If only he could go to camp, he'd
see how beautiful life can be.
|
| Ch. 7±30
*neffective Sales Letter
Hi! I'm Jim Johnson and I'm asking you to continue to use Kent
Color Labs for the processing of your film.
We've been in business for a long time and our customers tell us
they are quite satisfied with our service and the quality of our
processing.
We feel that you can't get better prices anywhere. We are also very
proud of our guarantee. No matter what we receive from you, you
|
| Ch. 7±31
*neffective Sales Letter
Sincerely,
|
| Ch. 7±32
iscussion for *neffective Sales
Letter to Camera Owner
1. Does the opening gra your
attention?
2. Is a central selling point developed?
3. Is the letter written from the reader's
perspective?
4. Should this letter develop rational or
emotional appeals?
|
| Ch. 7±33
iscussion for *neffective Sales
Letter to Camera Owner
5. Does the letter use concrete
examples?
6. Does it uild confidence in the
product or service?
7. Does it stimulate action in the
closing?
|
| Ch. 7±34
*mproved Sales Letter
|
| Ch. 7±35
*mproved Sales Letter
|
| Ch. 7±36
*mproved Sales Letter
We want your business. Right now, finish that film in your camera.
Grab a pen, fill out the enclosed mailer, and drop it in the mail.
Sincerely,
|
| Ch. 7±37
*mproved Sales Letter
P.S. If you respond within one week, we'll process your order at an
additional savings of 20 percent.
|
| Ch. 7±38
Checklist for `nalyzing
a Sales Letter
1. At what audience is the letter
aimed?
2. Is the appeal emotional or rational?
Is the appeal effective?
3. Is the opening effective?
4. What techniques capture the
reader's attention?
|
| Ch. 7±39
Checklist for `nalyzing
a Sales Letter
5. Is a central selling point
emphasized?
6. Does the letter emphasize reader
enefits?
7. What are some examples of
concrete language?
|
| Ch. 7±40
Checklist for `nalyzing
a Sales Letter
A. How is confidence in the product or
service developed?
9. How is price introduced?
10. What action is to e taken and how
is the reader motivated to take that
action?
|
| Ch. 7±41
|nd
|
| Ch. 7±42