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Lesson 1 Sexism in School
Lesson 1 Sexism in School
Lesson 1 Sexism in School
Citizen science
Why is it important?
Public understanding of science
The public communication of science and technology includes,
in its widest sense, all of the means, manners, and sites that
promote an interaction among science, technology, and the
public.
Proximity “is concerned with how writers represent not only themselves and their readers,
but also their material, in ways which are most likely to meet their readers’ expectations and
enables us to explain “how writers take their readers’ likely objections, background
knowledge, rhetorical expectations and reading purposes into account” (Hyland, 2010, p.
117).
Hyland (2010) discusses five ways through which proximity is negotiated: (a) organization:
adapting the rhetorical pattern to the audience’s expectations and needs; (b) argument
structure: shaping material for the audience through different types of appeals (e.g., novelty,
newsworthiness) and focusing (centering on the object of the study or on the disciplinary
procedures), and framing or “tailoring information to the assumed knowledge base of
potential readers” (e.g., jargon in research paper vs. definitions and clarifications in
popularizations); (c) credibility (e.g., showing expertise and knowledge of disciplinary
methods in research papers vs. direct quotes from scientists in popularizations); (d) stance:
using language to adopt positions and express attitude (e.g., hedges vs. attitude markers); and
(e) engagement: markers that acknowledge the presence of the readers and connect to them
(e.g., reader pronouns).
The style of the text
This text is originally a research paper published in the American journal Psychology Today and later
reprinted in the newspaper San Francisco Chronicle. As such it bears quite distinctive features both of an
academic magazine article and of a newspaper one.
The writer of a research paper lays great emphasis on a clear and logic presentation of his arguments,
illustrations and conclusions based upon a substantial amount of scientific data. The editor of a
newspaper, on the other hand, is reader conscious and space conscious. This usually puts great pressure
on the writer since he must try to present his material in a limited space as interestingly as possible.
1. Visual effect
2. Lively introduction
3. Academic flavour
Structural analysis of the text
Global reading
Introduction: contains a brief description of the present situation at school, and more
Part 1
significantly, the authors’ thesis argument which is in fact a rephrasing of the subtitle of
(1-2)
the article.
_______________________________________ Paras 3-12 focus on the fact that boys and
girls get different amounts and different
Part 2 Support the theme, arguing at the same time kinds of teacher attention.
(3-18) that teachers’ sexist attitudes can directly
affect students’ progress in learning. Para 13 is transitional. It contains a brief
_______________________________________ summary of variable “attention” and a quick
introduction to “feedback” with the word
“also” signalling the shift from one subtopic
to another.
Part 3 The writers deviate from the subject by wandering into sexism in the workplace. The authors’
(19) purpose in writing this section is to show the far-reaching harmful effects of sexism in
_______________________________________
school.
It offers practical ways of overcoming sexist attitudes in school.
Part 4 The authors make a call for immediate efforts to wipe out sexism in school. This brings us
(20-21) back to the thematic warning that classroom sexism still exists today.
_______________________________________
Detailed Reading Paragraph 3
The spectators at the football match became violent when their team lost.
A sport is called a spectator sport from the point of view of those who go to it in order to
enjoy watching it, rather than to take part in it. It is a sport watched by huge crowds of
people.
Meaning
We say education is not a spectator sport, because it is a process for students to
participate in.
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hold more positive attitudes toward school
Paraphrase
look up on education more favorably; more inclined to think that going to school is
useful.
coincidence noun a situation in which events happen at the same time in a way that is not
planned or expected
by coincidence
Unintentionally happening at the same time or in the same way as something else.
By coincidence, my sister and I bought our mom the same sweater for her birthday.
She doesn’t drink or smoke and I’m sure she will outlive us all.
Similarly, math comes under the more general subject title “science”.
This parallel relation is most evident in the sentence “whether the
subject was language arts and English or math and science”.
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more than their fair share of teacher attention
Paraphrase
Our research does show that the alleged claim made by some critics is true, but being more
assertive is not in any way the only reason for teachers to talk more to make students. There is a
subtle but more powerful reason behind that.
The word “are” has been italicized to emphasize its contrastive relation to the
word “however” three lines below. It produces a similar effect to that of the pattern
“It is true … but …”.
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reprimand transitive verb
Synonyms: Verb
baste, bawl out, call down, chew out, dress down, hammer, keelhaul, lambaste
I received one written reprimand in three years.
Synonym: rebuke
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Girls are often shortchanged in quality as well as in
quantity of teacher attention.
shortchanged- The literal meaning is “not paid back
enough change by the shop assistant”, or “not getting
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enough”.
to give someone back less money than they are owed when the person
is buying something from you:
Paraphrase
Girls are often cheated both in the quantity and quality of teacher’s attention.
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Group discussion
Serbin and O’Leary studies one end of the spectrum, that is, the preschool stage.
The other end, naturally, refers to tertiary education, here represented by the Coast
Guard Academy.
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sex desegregation
Sex segregation refers to the old practice of officially keeping male and female students
physically apart from each other, e.g., separating boys and girls into different dining
rooms for meals.
Sex desegregation originally means the eradication of such old practice. Now the
meaning has been broadened to include efforts made to stop treating males and
females differently.
academy – a college offering instruction or training in a special field, especially in music, art,
physical education, and military training.
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“Do it yourself” can be either (1) a statement telling you to accomplish the
task on your own or
(2) a description of something you buy partly finished or incomplete and
you cobble together out of improvised materials.
“Do it by yourself” implies you are alone or are told to be alone as you do it.
The “by yourself” focuses on the fact that you are solitary.
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Classroom chivalry is not only misplaced, it is detrimental.
Paraphrase
The “Let-me-do-it” behavior of the teachers towards girls in class is both improper
and harmful.
chivalry
the system of values (such as loyalty and honor) that knights in the Middle Ages were
expected to follow
Medieval chivalry
the knight’s code of chivalry
My first attempts - tough, bland, ungainly, sometimes all three - were pallid imitations
of Raich’s handiwork.
- Tribune News Service, cleveland, 4 Jan. 2022
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diffuse
If something such as knowledge or information is diffused, or if it diffuses somewhere, it is
made known over a wide area or to a lot of people.
e.g. Over time, the technology is diffused and adopted by other countries.
To diffuse a feeling, especially an undesirable one, means to cause it to weaken and lose its power to
affect people.
e.g. The arrival of letters from the president did nothing to diffuse the tension.
In Los Angeles County, the impacts of the pandemic have been relatively diffuse, with
millions of residents suffering and grieving in isolation across a famously vast sprawl.
- Matthew Bloch, New York Times, 29 Jan. 2021
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Despite caricatures of school as a harsh and punitive place, fewer than 5
percent of the teachers’ reactions were criticism, even of the mildest sort.
caricature noun
exaggeration by means of often ludicrous distortion of parts or characteristics
drew a caricature of the president
a representation especially in literature or art that has the qualities of caricature
His performance in the film was a caricature of a hard-boiled detective.
punitive adj.
Punitive actions are intended to punish people.
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Despite caricatures of school as a harsh and punitive place, fewer than 5
percent of the teachers’ reactions were criticism, even of the mildest sort.
Role play
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Too often, girls remain in the dark about the quality of their answers.
Paraphrase
Too often, girls remain ignorant of the quality of their answers. / remain uninformed about
the quality of their answers.
in the dark (about something) not knowing very much about something, because other
people are keeping it secret from you
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Unfortunately, acceptance, the imprecise response packing the least educational
punch, gets the most equitable sex distribution in classrooms.
Paraphrase
The least useful kind of feedback (acceptance) is distributed between boys and girls
most impartially, while the more useful kinds of feedback are heavily biased towards
boys. Thus the overall result is that the feedback boys receive is much more beneficial
that that for girls.
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Active students receiving precise feedback are more likely to achieve
academically.
Paraphrase
Boy students who get more precise information from the teachers
concerning their class performance have more chances to succeed in their
field of learning.
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Reflection
Occupational segregation.
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Interactive resources refer to features which set out an argument to explicitly establish the writer’s
preferred interpretations. They are concerned with ways of organizing discourse to anticipate readers’
knowledge and reflect the writer’s assessment of what needs to be made explicit to constrain and guide
what can be recovered from the text.
transitions
Frame markers
Endophoric markers
Evidentials
Code glosses
comprise the rich set of internal devices
used to mark additive, contrastive, and
consequential steps in the discourse
Paraphrase
conversation among people which exhibits elements of sexism
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Critical thinking
“Mansplaining”,
“Manspreading”,
“Manterrupting”
Part 3 The writers deviate from the subject by wandering into sexism in the workplace. The authors’
(19) purpose in writing this section is to show the far-reaching harmful effects of sexism in
_______________________________________
school.
It offers practical ways of overcoming sexist attitudes in school.
Part 4 The authors make a call for immediate efforts to wipe out sexism in school. This brings us
(20-21) back to the thematic warning that classroom sexism still exists today.
_______________________________________
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There is a light at the end of the educational tunnel.
a light at the end of the tunnel : a reason to believe that a bad situation
will end soon or that a long and difficult job will be finished soon;
the end of a difficult situation or task, the solution to a difficult problem.
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Classroom biases are not etched in stone, …
Paraphrase
“Equality”, on the other hand, refers to the condition of students being equal to
each other in their treatment by the teacher.
discussion which calls for special knowledge and high reasoning ability
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Discussion
Why is
Why is itit urgent
urgent to
to do
do away
away with
with
sexism in
sexism in school?
school?
Is itit possible
Is possible to
to do
do so?
so?
Detailed Reading
Academic flavour
• Reader mentions bring readers into a discourse through second person pronouns,
particularly inclusive we which identifies the reader as someone who shares a similar
perspective to the writer.
• Directives are instructions to the reader, mainly expressed through imperatives and
obligation modals, which direct readers a) to another part of the text or to another text, b)
how to carry out some action in the real-world, or c) how to interpret an argument.
• Questions invite direct collusion because they address the reader as someone with an
interest in the issue the question raises and the good sense to follow the writer’s response
to it.
• Appeals to shared knowledge are explicit signals asking readers to recognise something
as familiar or accepted (obviously, of course).
• Personal asides briefly interrupt the argument to offer a comment on what has been said,
adding more to the writer-reader relationship than to propositional development.
Stance: includes features which refer to the ways writers present themselves and convey their
judgements, opinions, and commitments. It is the ways that writers intrude to stamp their personal
authority onto their arguments or step back and disguise their involvement.