Written expression

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Direction: Identify the one part
that must be changed to make the
sentence correct.
16. A. The Secretary was calm in explaining
the advantage of
B. The k-12 Curriculum when
c. various protests from the parents
d. begun in the streets.
Ca: D
Begun>began?
Or
In>on?

HAHA BASTA LETTER D

17. A. The researchers from DepEd
travelling
B. too many towns and cities all over
the world
C. to monitor the implementation of
D. their program.
Ca: B
too×
to✓

Or A (if typo error Ang Too)

18. Multiple intelligence as introduce by
Howard Gardner,
B. looks into the eight types of
intelligences found in a man
c. which could be helping the teachers in
d. identifying the pupils’ capabilities in
class.
Ca: C
Could be helping ×
Could help✓
19. Gender inequality exist when
b. Anyone from the group of LGBT
c. are prevented from any privileges
d. which normal sexes enjoy
Ca: C
Are×
Is ✓
20. Thailand is another famous Asian
tourist destination
b. which everyone enjoys going to
c. because of its street foods and
d. majestic Grand Palace which the
prime Minister holds office.
Ca: D
Which×
Where✓
prime>Prime(might be typo
error)
21. The expensive, antiquity, silver
set of spoons and forks
b. was formerly owned by my
grandmother
c. who in turns gave it to me as
d. gift my own wedding.
Not sure
A or D
Antiquity or antique
Gift my own wedding> gift on
my wedding
22. A.The students in the state college
have prepared
B. a petition to remove a professor for
bribery and immorality issues.
C. They are now gathered more
signatures
D. to make the petition stronger
Ca:C
Gathered×
Gathering✓
23. A.Felling in love is difficult
b. to tell specially
c. if you have missed feelings
d. to the person.
Ca: B
Specially×
Especially✓
24. A.The lady news anchor looked
B. so refreshing in her floral blouse
and pleated skirt
C. in the television, delivered the news
D. lively and spontaneity.
Ca:C
In×
On✓
25. A. In the middle of confusion,
B. Joseph the man who seemed
C. to have lose hope, suddenly heard
a voice
D. telling him to remain steadfast
and keep the faith.
Ca: C
Lose×
Lost ✓
27. A.Inclusive education gives
importance to all people
B. regardless of cultural affinity and the
physical limitations.
C. They are the people who wishes to
learn and become useful towards
achieving
D. improvement of their lives.
Ca: C
Useful×
Successful
28. Drinking fluids are essential to staying healthy
because they give nutrients to our cells
B. and remove waste from our body. To remain
hydrated, one must be able to drink
C. at least eight glasses of water and a fresh juice
daily but not coffee and carbonated drinks
D. while tea with antioxidants can also hydrate
body.
Ca:A
Are×
Is✓
29. A.The Japanese have regard for the beauty
of the nature.
B. This reverence has led to the creation of
one of the world’s most spectacular park
systems
C. covering 5.4 percent of their total land area.
D. The park also boast of having the most
beautiful nature preserves.
Not sure
A- The Japanese has (Japanese
consider collective noun )
D- The park boasts (2nd pov)
30.A. Swimming is a good form of
restoring wellness
B. and making you fit
C. therefore you are stretching your
lung muscles
D.and oxygenating your internal
system.
Ca: C
Therefore×
Because✓
31. A mother and her new born baby is
encourage
B.to exchange smiles as often as they
could
C. because it is important for bonding and
attachment
D. as well as for the intellectual and
social development of the child
Ca: A
New born ×
Newborn✓
32. Despite being a PWD,
B. Carina preserves in her studies
C. and ignores any hardships that
come along in life
D. to pursued her dream of becoming
a SPED teacher.
Ca: D
Pursued×
Pursue✓
33. A. For years, aspirin was hailed as a heart
hero,
b. For patients with problems of the heart experts
recently discovered
c. that they causes stomach problem such as
gastro intestinal bleeding especially
d. if one takes it regularly even if he has no
known heart ailments
Not sure
A-heart must be
remove(redundancy)
B. Fragment. It must have a
period after heart
C. Must be stomach problems
34. A. If depression will not given an
attention, it predisposes one to hibernate
and worse end his life.
B.So, therefore, we should all create a
consciousness to spot
C. friends or family members who seem
to be undergoing something.
D. A listening ear, a warm hug or
handshake matter most.
Ca: B
So, therefore,×
Therefore✓
38. A. The language diversity in the
Philippines is amazing!
B. With 7,100 islands, history of colonization
from Malays to Americans,
C. bringing different cultures and traditions,
one could imagine the richness of the language
or dialects spoken around.
D. Thus, don’t be surprise at all when you hear
someone saying a strange word.
Ca: B
35. A.The sudden demise of Ms. Gina Lopez
created a large vacuum in the hearts of people.
B. who admires her for being a staunch
supporter of the anti-mining and deforestation
C. She also had numerous foundations for the
poor children
D. and programs that care for the
environment.
Ca: b
admires*
admire
36. A.Before Richard Gomez became a
popular actor in the local film industry,
C. he was a waiter at a certain pizza parlor.
C. With his good looks, excel acting skills
diligence, and perseverance, he rose to
stardom for several years.
D. His life changed when he got married. He
is the incumbent mayor in Ormoc City.
Ca: C
Excel acting skills×
Excellent acting skills
37. Quitting should never enter in the mind
of us,
b. We should think forward and proactively.
Remember no guts, no glory,
c. so start fixing your mind-set, do your best
and persevere.
d. Just keep on going through life. You do
your best and God will do the rest.
Ca: A
Us×
Ours✓
Written Expression 2

1. A.Finance statements
B. are the formal reports
C. prepared
D. by accountants
Ca: A
Finance×
Financial✓
2. A.The man
B. gives antidote so powerful
C. that any poison was made
harmless
D. after taking it
Ca: B
Gives antidotes so powerful×
Gives a powerful antidotes✓
3.A. In many cities around the world
B. The number of homeless people
C. have become
D. a big problem
Ca: C
Have×
Has✓

The number >has

A number> have
4. A.Wallow in disappointment
B.over something
C. you did
D. is not productive
Ca: A
Wallow×
Wallowing✓
54. The Philippines
b. Has accommodations
c. To suit everyone
d. from five-star hotels to
simple hotels
Ca: D
From simple hotels to five-star hotels

Or B if the spelling of
accommodations is incorrect
6.A. I bought some
B. silver charming victorian
C. ornaments
D. at the flee market
Ca:B
Silver charming Victorian×
Charming silver Victorian✓
Determiner-quantity-
opinion-size-shape-
condition-age-color-
pattern-origin-material-
purpose
7. A. The tale that was
B. told in low and mystery
voice
C. kept us on the
D. edge of seats.
Ca:B
Mystery voice×(noun)
Mysterious voice✓(adjective)
8.A. It is often said that
B. lightning never strike twice
C. at the same place
D. but it is not true
Ca:B
Strike×
Strikes✓
9. A.The novel was so popular
B. among teenagers
C. to a point that a movie was
made
D. based from the story
Ca: C
To a point that a movie was
made×
That a movie was made✓
10. A. As a mode of expository writing,
B. the narrated writing offers writers
C. a chance to think and write
D. about themselves.
CA:B
narrated×
Narrative✓
11. A.You should make sure
B. your body has get
C. the necessary vitamins and
minerals
D. human needs.
Ca: B
Has get×
Gets✓
12. A.Outside of written records
B. evidence of Philistines existence
C. have survived
D.in pottery relics
Ca: C
Have×
Has
13. A.To skip a meal
B. maximizes
C. the caloric effect
D. of the food we eat
Ca: A
To skip×
Skipping✓
14. A. A team led by the government
agency concerned
B. say that chemicals from the factory
C. had contaminated sediment the bay
D. and entered the food chain
Ca:B
Say×
Says✓
15. A.Oncologists are doctors
B. who specialize
C. in treating
D. the cancer.
Ca: D

The×
A✓
16. A.The obligations of the
accountant to the client
B. rested upon agreed scope
C. of the agreements which,
D. in effect represents a
contractual agreement
Ca:D
Represents×
Represent✓
17. A.Sit cramped
B. for a very long period of time
C. in dry conditions
D. can affect our circulatory
system.
Ca: A
Sit cramped×
Sitting crampily
18. A.You are not always in control
B. of what goes in your mind,
C. because only you can determine
D. what stays there
Ca: C

Because×
But✓
19. A.Researchers are learning to detect
changes
B. beyond the huge population
C. of bacteria, viruses, yeast cells and other
microbes
D. that thrive in the mouth.
Ca:D

Thrive×
Thrives✓
20. A.Many medications are safe
and effective when taken alone
B. and ineffective or
counterproductive
C. when taken in combination
D. with something else
Ca:B

And×
But✓
21. A.The Gleaning Network
B. an organizer in the united kingdom
C. is trying to reduce waste
D. and solve farming problems
Note!
D is the answer if problem
nkalagay instead of problems but B
is the answer if problems nka sulat
22. A.Money is not natural reward of love
B. that is why we call a man mercenary
C. if he marries a woman
D. for the sake of her money.
Ca:A
23. A.Public opinion polls have
consistently
B. demonstrated the public’s
willingness
C. for “tradeoff” economic growth
D. for environmental protection
Ca: C

For "tradeoff"(noun)×
To "trade off" (adj.)✓
31.A. The majority of scientific evidence
B. showed that, for a healthy adult
C. moderate quantities of caffeine
D. pose no significant in health risk
Not sure
Shows
Or
Significance
32. A.In 1964,
B. the African countries of Tanganyaki and
Zanziban
C. has united to form
D. a single country, now called Tanzania
Ca:C
Written expression 3
17.A. I had a stream visitors
B. which kept me sane,
C. but I never realized that the whole effort
D. would be so tiring
19. A.The house furnishings of the
B. Ramon mansion by the lake
C. has impressed the guests
D. during the house warming
Ca: A
Furnishing×
Furnished✓
20. A.To lessen monthly expense
B. the newlywed decided
C. to rent a small apartment
D. in the old building
Ca: A
Expense×
Expenses✓
21. A. Student and teachers alike
B. seem to felt that there is
C. more virtue in admitting growth
D. than knowledge
Ca:B
Seem to felt×
Seem to feel
22. A.The expensive antiquity silver
mirror
B. was formerly owned by my only
surviving aunt
C. who in turn gave it to me during
D. my 18 birthday celebration
th
22. A. The students in the state college
have
B. prepared a letter of inquiry to the
school officials
C. in relation to the sudden increase
with
D. tuition fees imposed by the school
Ca: C
With×
Of✓
24. A. As seamstress and Single parent, Aling
Sonia is earning enough
B. for her young children who are in elementary
grades
C. but as time goes on two of her children are
now in college
D. making her earnings insufficient for their
family's need.
Not sure
D?
family's needs instead of family's need
25. A. The Journalism is always updated
B. with regards to certain trendy words
than clinchers
C. uttered by politicians and news casters
such as
D. win-win situation, wake-up calls, and
proactive roles.
Ca: A
Journalism×
Journalist✓
26. A. The journalist is always updated
B. with regards to trendy words than
clinches
C. uttered by politicians and news casters
such as
D. win-win situation, wake-up call and
proactive roles
Ca:B
Cliches×
Clinchers✓
27. The process of an active transport
substance
B. can be described through the
movement of molecules
C. in an area of their high concentration
D. to an area of their low concentration
or vice versa.
Ca:C
In an area of their high
concentration×
From an area of high
concentration✓
28. A. After looking at academically
challenged and delayed learners,
B. Text Mapping Project, a non-profit
organization in America was established
C. for serve classroom teachers in assisting
these learners
D. to improve reading comprehension
skills.
Ca: C
For serve×
To serve✓
29. A.Hydration is important so that for
someone to stay hydrated
B. he must be able to drink at least
eight(8) glasses of water
C. and a fresh juice daily but not coffee
and carbonated drinks
D. while tea with antioxidants can also
hydrate body.
Not sure
Letter A is a run-on sentence
Hydration is important. To stay hydrated
or
Hydration is important. In order for
someone to stay hydrated
Ca:B
Run-on it must have a period after peaks
Ca:A
Are×
Is✓
Will lose it? instead of can loose it?
Ca: C

Redundant(remove which)
A. Felling grateful and
B. Not expressing it's importance is like
C. Wrapping a very precious gift
D. Not giving it.
Ca: B
It's×
Its✓
a. Amid of swallow raging floods caused
b. by strong typhoon, Janela Lelis
c. a young girl from Mindanao, Albay risked
her life
d. to save the Philippine flag from waters and
mud.
Ca: D
waters*
water
a. Playing tennis for a few rounds every week
are a
b. good form of exercising because you are
able
c. to stretch your body muscles and
oxygenate your internal system
d. for better stamina and wellness
Ca: A
are a*
is a