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Excessive or Overlapping Subordination
Excessive or Overlapping Subordination
SUBORDINATION/ AWKWARD
COORDINATION
OBJECTIVE:
TO ENABLE STUDENTS TO PROPERLY USE
COORDINATION AND SUBORDINATION
EXCESSIVE OR
OVERLAPPING
SUBORDINATION
• I have never before
known a man like Ernie,
my friend who is always
AWKWARD ready to help anybody
who is in trouble that
involves finances.
• Because I wanted to go to
college, I mowed and
BETTER trimmed lawns all
summer to earn enough
money to pay my tuition.
• Burns won, and it
AWKWARD
was a landslide vote,
but he had rigged
the election.
• Public speaking, I
think, should be taught
in freshmen English.
Better • Public speaking should
be taught in freshmen
English.
2.By placing the idea in a main clause of a
complex sentence.
• You are the first trainee hired for this
program. (Use a simple sentence for
emphasis.)
Emphatic • Although we considered many
candidates, you are the first trainee
hired for this program. (Independent
clause contains the main idea.)
•Sympathy I did
Emphatic
not want!
4. By using parallel structure and
order of climax.
..
(Weak)
(Emphatic)
6. By Using the Active Voice
instead of the passive Voice.
• Little attention is being paid
Unemphatic
to cheap, nutritious foods by
the average shopper.
Loose
legislate for those who will
behave themselves while
completely ignoring those
who will not.