SMK DATO’ SHAHARDIN

SEKOLAH HEBAT
ENGLISH LANGUAGE
FORM 5 MELEWAR
DATE: SEPT. 2021
TIME : 1.00 – 2.30 p.m.
TEACHER : PN SUSILA PONNUSAMY
ESSAY
WRITING
 Process
What happened? Thanked / Felt grateful
/Learned
Who did what?

Step 1 Step 2 Step 3 Step 4

When/Who/What/ Who helped to solve

the problem?
Where/Why/How
PART 1 :INTRODUCTION
when
How
Last Wednesday....
I was tired and...
who
I was cycling
What Add descriptive words

Where / Why
Describe nouns/verb using
..home after attending my adjectives/adverbs
tuition class
 PART 2 :PROBLEM
What happened.....
Suddenly, a man slipped and fell.
My father was shocked.
Who did what....
The man was trying to get to a
table. The floor was wet. He
stepped on the wet floor. He was
unconcious.
Add feelings
PART 3 :SOLUTION
Who did what to help...
Immediatey, my father rushed to
the man and carried him. Another
man also helped to carry the
man. One of the workers called
an ambulance. The ambulance
arrived. The paramedics gave
him first aid and brough him to
the hospital. My father was
relieved.
Add feelings
 PART 4 : ENDING

thanked
Add descriptive words
felt grateful

Learned a lesson
Finally,the man was thankful to
everyone who helped him. He
Use linkers
was extremely grateful to my
father for his quick action. He
learned a lesson that he must be
more careful in future.
Remember to use linkers You may use
idioms/proverbs/
similes…
Suddenly.....

Immediately....
Finally.....
Besides....
Then....
 NARRATIE WRITING

Write a story about an accident which you have

witnessed
 Describe the accident
 Describe what you and your
friends did
4 PARTS
When/Who/ Last Wednesday, my friends and I
were cycling home after school. It
What/Where/ was after our football practice. We
felt tired but happy.
Why/How
PART 1 :INTRODUCTION
when
How
Last Wednesday....
We were tired but happy.
who
my friends and I
were cycling Add descriptive words
What
Where / Why
Describe nouns/verb using
. home after school. It was adjectives/adverbs
after our football practice.
 PART 2 :PROBLEM PART 3 :SOLUTION
d . ....
e ne
a p p at . .. .
a t h w h s
h d i d i ng
W
Wh
o
f e el
d
Ad Who did what to help...
Suddenly, I saw a car speeding towards the Immediately, Raju called the ambulance. Susan
traffic lights. As a van came out of the junction, helped the driver of the van. We gave some
the car crashed into the van. There was a loud water to the little girls. After ten minutes the
bang. My friends and I rushed to see what we ambulance arrived. The paramedics gave first aid
could do. There was blood everywhere. The and sent the victims to the hospital. Raju and I
driver of the car was unconscious. There were went to the hospital as well.
two girls in the van, crying for their mother.

Add feelings
 Finally, the driver of the car thanked the
Thanked/ people who had helped him. He had a
heart attack and felt grateful that he
survived. He also apologised to the
Felt grateful/ driver of the van. He also thanked my
friends and I who had helped him.

Learned

P traffic lights. As a van came out of the junction,
An Accident
ar t 1Wednesday, my friends and I were cycling
Last
P home after school. It was after our football
practice. We felt tired but happy.
a r t2
Suddenly, I saw a car speeding towards the traffic
Plights. As a van came out of the junction, the car
crashed into the van. There was a loud bang. My
friends and I rushed to see what we could do. There
P who had helped
was blood everywhere. The driver of the car was
unconscious. There were two girls in the van, crying
for their mother.
r 3
tSuddenly, I saw a car speeding towards the
a
the car crashed into the van. There was a loud
bang. My friends and I rushed to see what we
could do. There was blood everywhere. The
driver of the car was unconscious. There were
two girls in the van, crying for their mother.
r 4
t Finally,
a the driver of the car thanked the people
him. He had a heart attack and felt
grateful that he survived. He also apologised to the
driver of the van. He also thanked my friends and I
who had helped him.
THANK YOU!