Task 2: Parents often give

children everything they ask for

and let them do what they like.

Is it good for children? What are

the consequences when they
grow up?
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Direct Questions
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Task 2: Parents often give children everything they ask for
and let them do what they like.

Is it good for children? What are the consequences when

they grow up?
Key Words:
+ Parents and children
+ Ask for – let them do what they like
Questions:
+ Good for children?
+ Consequences when grow up?
 Good for children? Later in life?
No? but Why? The consequences?

• Independent • Be exposed to harmful habits

• Struggle later in life • Be incited disobedience
• Lack of basic self-care • Rebellious adolescence
• Adult babies • Be likely to commit crimes
Pre-Intro
Hook sentence?
 Translating exercise - HOOK
• 1 xu hướng đang nổi lên

• Một trường phái tư tưởng tin rằng

• Nhiều người có nhiều cái nhìn về

• Trong những năm qua/thập kỷ qua, điều đáng chú ý là

• Chưa bao giờ thất bại khi thu hút sự chú ý của đám đông

và kích luận các cuộc tranh luận

• Đang dần trở nên phổ biến/là chủ đề được quan tâm

• Là một cuộc tranh luận dài hơi

• Là một chủ đề gây tranh cãi trong nhiều thế kỷ

 Translating exercise - HOOK
• 1 xu hướng đang nổi lên

=> There is a growing trend among + N + towards + V-ing

• Một trường phái tư tưởng tin rằng

=>a school of thought holds that + N

• Nhiều người có nhiều cái nhìn về

=> Many people have different views about + N

• Trong những năm qua/thập kỷ qua, một điều đáng

chú ý là

=> Over the past decades, it is noticeable that + N

 Translating exercise - HOOK
• Chưa bao giờ thất bại khi thu hút sự chú ý của đám đông và kích

luận các cuộc tranh luận

=> Has never failed to draw public attention and provoke debates

• Đang dần trở nên phổ biến/là chủ đề được quan tâm

=> Is gaining traction / a topic of interest

• Là một cuộc tranh luận dài hơi

=> Is a perennial debate

• Là một chủ đề gây tranh cãi trong nhiều thế kỷ

=> Has been a controversial topic for centuries

 Intro
answer 2 questions
at the same time
Chiều chuộng quá mức

Over-indulgence (n)

accommodate demand
_ccommod_te children’s every dem_nd
fulfill
F_lf_ll all of their wishes
grant
Gr_nt every request
Elaborating your vocab
• Do what you want, eat what you like, and marry who you love
=> Personal freedom
• A negative impact
=> Dire consequence / detrimental / devastating effect
• Bad result
=> Repercussion / consequence
• The way parents educate their children
=> child-rearing practice / parenting / child raising
• Keep going
=> Continue into + Noun
Sample:
Recently, there is a growing trend among parents towards trying to
accommodate their children‘s every demand and giving them more personal
freedom. I hold an opinion that this child-rearing practice is detrimental to
children before arguing it may have long-term repercussions that continue
into their adulthood.
outline
Body1

Body2
#1-question: Is it good for children?
Absolutely not!
Topic sentence + 2 sub-ideas + 2 supporting sentences

Parents: Inadvertently teach -> be overly reliant / overly

dependent -> pester/badger for everything -> deprive
motivation in life -> take a heavy toll on many facets of
life (e.g: school performance)

children: become fully dependent -> struggle in life

-> adverse impact
-> for e.g: finance / personal hygiene / self-centeredness
What are the consequences when they grow up?

#1: without close supervision -> more likely to be exposed to

negative influences -> adopt bad habits -> e.g: video games,

smoking, etc

#2: can lead to disobedience + recklessness -> rebellious

adolescence or troubled adulthood -> statistics shown -> began

criminal activities or illegal activities resulted from parent’s

negligence
Topic Vocab
 rebellious adolescence
• Over-indulgence from childhood can lead to _________

• Having everything’s ready on the table can deprive them of the

motivation to work towards their own goals
___________

independent may cause them to struggle

• The inability to be fully _____________
in many facets of life.

• Children who are granted every request typically develop a habit of

relying on their parents for everything
pestering and ________