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Writing Effectively: Lesson 5
Writing Effectively: Lesson 5
Lesson 5
Creating Unity in Academic Writing
Achieving coherence
“A piece of writing is coherent when it elicits the response: ‘I
follow you. I see what you mean.’ It is incoherent when it elicits
the response: ‘I see what you're saying here, but what has it got to
do with the topic at hand or with what you just told me above?’ ”
- Johns, A.M
What is coherence?
Coherence in a piece of writing means
that the reader can easily understand
it. Coherence is about making
everything flow smoothly. The reader
can see that everything is logically
arranged and connected, and
relevance to the central focus of the
essay is maintained throughout.
Two key aspects of coherence
Cohesion: This relates to the linking of ideas within a
sentence, the linking of sentences (the ties between
sentences) within a paragraph and the linking between
paragraphs.
Even if English is not your first language, you can achieve coherence in
your writing by using some cohesive devices. Cohesive devices are the
“glue” that holds a piece of writing together. They carry meaning within
a sentence and from a previous sentence into the next. They allow the
reader to follow from one part of the text to another, and to understand
the logical relationships between sentences and paragraphs.
We will examine four cohesive devices: (Note: the symbols in brackets
will be used in examples and practice activities.)
Pronouns (P)
Repetition (with exact word or parallel term/synonym) (R)
Transitions (T)
Parallelism (PllM): the use of similar grammatical forms and sentence
structures
Pronouns (details in another
document )
Repetition
Repetition in a piece of writing does not always
demonstrate cohesion. Study these sentences:
Unnecessary repetition or limited vocabulary
range:
The purpose of the simulation exercise is
to simulate the racing performance of a racing car
as it will perform in an actual race.
Improved sentence:
The purpose of the simulation exercise is to recreate
the performance of a car in an actual race.
When a pronoun is used, sometimes what the pronoun refers to (ie, the
referent) is not always clear. Clarity is achieved by repeating a key noun
or synonym. Repetition is a cohesive device used deliberately to improve
coherence in a text.
In the following text, decide if the referent for the pronoun it is clear.
Otherwise, replace it with the key noun English where clarity is needed.
1. In 2006, there was a proposal to build a stadium near the Auckland waterfront. IN FACT,...
the government did not give its full support.
this proposal was turned down because there was simply insufficient land.
detailed plans had been drawn up to ascertain the site's viability.
2. The plans were submitted to the Auckland City Council for consideration in February 2006.
HOWEVER,...
the plans were all well-received.
several local bodies also submitted plans.
none of the plans met all the requirements.
3. The main objection to the stadium proposal was the destruction of the waterfront views. IN
ADDITION,...
the estimated costs of building the stadium were deemed reasonable.
it would have been the best location for the rugby world cup.
it would adversely affect the busy shipping sector there.
4. The recreational needs of the waterfront residents were not
ignored. ON THE CONTRARY,...
they were not consulted about the project.
letters were sent out well in advance to ascertain their views.
they would also lose their privacy.