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lesson2 discuss类型议论文
lesson2 discuss类型议论文
lesson2 discuss类型议论文
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第①种议论文题型
讨论双方观点,并且给出你的个人意见。
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第①种议论文题型
这种题型的写作逻辑超超超级简单:
核心段各自分析 A 和 B 两个观点的合理性,
然后在结尾段给出详细的个人观点。
我认为给出清晰的个人观点是考察重点。
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个人观点里必须明确体现 A 和 B 之间的关系,这也决定了核心段的展开顺序
第二种情况:两个观点必须共存 ( 缺一不可 ) ;
第三种情况:取决于(取决于的内容必须和核心段扩展内容相关)
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第①种情况
这个题目里的两个观点都有道理,但是你有一定的偏向。
在介绍段预告你的观点偏向,
然后在核心段按照弱 - 强的顺序依次展开。
结尾段的时候结合核心段的扩展内容来强化强,弱化弱。
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弱强观点的的结构安排
4). 用强化强,弱化弱的方法,突出自己的偏向(短期 - 长远 少数 - 多
数 偶尔 - 经常)
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Task2 :
celebrities make the problems seem less important. Discuss both views
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It is quite common that many celebrities, like movie stars and famous
definitely attract more attention and provide more help to the problems.
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On the one hand, there has been a concern that the importance of
charitable activities may be weakened with the presence of many
famous people. This is because fans of the movie stars or the NBA
legends may pay more attention to how their idols dress themselves
or whether they are in the center of the stage. What is worse,
tabloids lead readers to the gossips or scandals of the celebrities
instead of how much they contribute to helping people in need.
This explains why many people worry that famous people may
have a negative effect on the charitable activity they participate in.
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On the other hand, advocates of celebrities’ support towards worldwide
pressing issues believe that they have such significant influence on millions
world countries, their followers may contribute their own effort to combating
the same problems. For example, in 2015, hundreds of sports stars and Nobel
Prize winners who took part in a series of activities named the Ice Bucket
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Personally, my view is that while the attention of the public may
be drawn from the event itself to the stars they are interested in,
this usually lasts for a short period of time. Support from these
addressed.
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Task 2:
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The argument over whether learning at home or at school is better for children has
not been settled yet. Whereas home education offers better protection with
individual learning and opportunities for families to bond, schools have a superior
range of material and human resources. Ultimately, I think the school experience is
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There are several advantages for children who learn at home. Firstly, they can spend more time with
their parents and siblings. Many social problems are associated with families not spending enough
quality time together. Teaching children at home also provides them with an individualised learning
environment. Instruction is custom designed and moves at the child’s own pace and in accordance
with his or her individual learning style. Finally, home schooling protects children from bullies and
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On the other hand, the school environment also offers advantages for children. Schools encourage children to socialise with their peers
and learn how to cope with gossip, bullying and peer pressure. In addition, children will receive better tuition across a range of
disciplines, as schools have teachers who are trained in special subjects. What is more, schools provide better access to physical
resources such as sports equipment, musical instruments and library books.- 三个点,各有解释,但还是建议不写这么多。
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I believe that children are better off in a school environment. Although family time
and individual learning are important, the range of expertise and resources that
schools offer cannot be matched in the home. School environments may present
difficult social situations, but so too does the real world and children must learn to
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必须注意第②种情况
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A/B 观点的内容让你觉得他们在解决一个问题上是缺一不可的,
所以你会选择一个共存的观点逻辑来写这篇文章。
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共存观点的的结构安排
every child.
2.I believe that the joint effort of the government and individuals is the key to eradicating environmental
problems.
3.I believe that a combination of skyscrapers and low-rise buildings is an ideal strategy of city planning.
4.I believe that both punishments and other measures should be used together to make roads safer.
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Some believe cities should build more high-rise buildings,
opinion.
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Most modern cities are faced with the dilemma of using their limited
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Increasing the number of high-rise buildings is beneficial to the development of cities in
terms of economic growth and environmental improvements. With regard to the former, as
skyscrapers can significantly increase the space available for business and residence, a
larger number of companies and employees can be well accommodated in cities, such as
London or New York, which may contribute to more business activities and better
economy. The other benefit of an increasing number of tall buildings is that more open
spaces can be saved for various public facilities, such as parks, squares, and sports
facilities. All of these contribute to improvements in citizens' living environment.
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On the other hand, people in support of the government posing a limit on the height of
buildings believe that living in such an environment has obvious advantages to their day-
to-day life. Firstly, if the community mainly consists of three or four-storey residential
buildings, each household can enjoy more sunshine and better ventilation which
contribute to lifting peoples' spirit and improving their health. In addition, residents of
low-rise buildings, which usually are not equipped with lifts, are forced to climb stairs on
a daily basis. As a result, a healthier lifestyle can be promoted and people are also more
likely to meet their neighbours.
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only by combining tall and short buildings can a city be developed in the
best way.
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Task 2
Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key
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People have differing views with regard to the question of how to make our roads safer. In
my view, both punishments and a range of other measures can be used together to promote
better driving habits.
On the one hand, strict punishments can certainly help to encourage people to drive more
safely. Penalties for dangerous drivers can act as a deterrent, meaning that people avoid
repeating the same offence. There are various types of driving penalty, such as small fines,
licence suspension, driver awareness courses, and even prison sentences. The aim of these
punishments is to show dangerous drivers that their actions have negative consequences. As a
result, we would hope that drivers become more disciplined and alert, and that they follow
the rules more carefully.
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On the other hand, (many people believe that) safe driving can be promoted in several different ways
that do not punish drivers. Firstly, it is vitally important to educate people properly before they start to
drive, and this could be done in schools or even as part of an extended or more difficult driving test.
Secondly, more attention could be paid to safe road design. For example, signs can be used to warn
people, speed bumps and road bends can be added to calm traffic, and speed cameras can help to deter
people from driving too quickly. Finally, governments or local councils could reduce road accidents by
investing in better public transport, which would mean that fewer people would need to travel by car.
大家试着自己写一下这个结尾段。
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取决于的情况只给大家
提供一篇来自考官的范文。
阅读并理解结构。
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Task 2
Completing university education is thought by some to be the best
way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that
getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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It is considered by some that being a university graduate is the key to securing a good job, while there are
others who think that it is better to have experience and soft skills. In my opinion,I believe that having
university education is essential for academic jobs while soft skills and experience are more useful in business.
On the one hand, many think it is easier for most people to find a good job if they are university graduates with a good degree. In other words, having tertiary education put
s people one step ahead of others who do not and
this can be the deciding factor in getting a good job. The competition to get in to universities and the increasing number of graduates show just how significant this level of
education is for people's future work opportunities.
On the other hand, having work experience and soft skills, such as leadership skills and other interpersonal
skills, can also throw the balance in favour of the applicant, according to some. For many positions there
are an overwhelming number of applicants and, therefore, it is often thought that having relevant experience in that line of work or having acquired useful soft skills that ca
n be valuable to a company, can put one
ahead of the game when applying for a position.
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Finally, in my opinion, whether needing high level education or skills and experience, depends
on the position being applied for. Take for example law, medicine or teaching, it is impossible to
be considered for a position without the required educational background. In contrast, in business,
it would be more important for a candidate to have soft skills and experience in that line of business so they can step into
a position without further training and be of immediate benefit to the
company. – 必须要详细解释的个人观点段
In conclusion, getting a good job requires a relevant background either in experience or education
depending on the type of work and field. People should make sure they attain the necessary skills
or degrees before applying for a job in order to be sure of success. – 重复前面的个人观点
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discuss 类型的介绍段
2). 回答个人观点
Some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to the society. Others argue that being a
citizen involves more responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different opinions about whether paying taxes is the only civic duty they should take.
Although being a taxpayer helps them to make their contributions to developing the society, I would argue
that there are many other social responsibilities for every member of the community.
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discuss 类型的介绍段
2). 回答个人观点
Some people think that robots are very important to humans' future development, but others
think that they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and
give your opinion.
People have different opinions about whether intelligent robots are beneficial to human’s future
or harmful to the society. In my opinion, while there may be some problems caused by using
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discuss 类型的介绍段
2). 回答个人观点
Some people think that children of busy parents should be sent to daycare centres, while
others believe that they should be cared for by their grandparents. Discuss both views and
give your opinion.
People have different views about who should help parents that are too busy to take care of
their children. In my opinion, although grandparents are able to look after their
grandchildren with sufficient attention and care, sending them to a kindergarten is a wiser
decision.
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discuss 类型的介绍段
写出事实版—来自题目的事实或者观点 A 和 B 之间共通的事实
Some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to the society. Others argue
that being a citizen involves more responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your
opinion.
In almost every country, citizens are required by the law to pay their fair share of taxes.
Although paying taxes helps people to make their contributions to developing the society, I
would argue that there are many other social responsibilities for every member of the
community.
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discuss 类型的介绍段
写出事实版—来自题目的事实或者观点 A 和 B 之间共通的事实
Some people say that to become a good teacher, you should acquire enough training, while
others say that teaching capabilities can be developed with experience. Discuss both view
s and give your opinion
Teachers are expected to be skilful at teaching and guiding students not only academically
but also morally. In my opinion, such skills can be better fostered through real work
写出事实版—来自题目的事实或者观点 A 和 B 之间共通的事实
Some people think that studying in a college or university is the best way for students to
prepare for their future career. But others think they should leave school as soon as possible
to develop their career through work experience. Discuss both these views and give your
own opinion.
Many young people have to face a dilemma of whether to start to work as early as possible
or continue their education in a university after graduating from high school. I think that the
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