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Writing Scientific Papers
Writing Scientific Papers
• Faculty Leaders
Faculty leaders support and guide your progress through SRP
(assignments, troubleshooting, etc.)
Cluster Group Names
• Groups named by • Example: Hospital
dominant themes, Care/Aging
leader expertise & – Many projects related
NIH Mission to hospital care
– Due to project variety, – Several (not all)
some project funded by NIA T35
assignments based on – could also include
methods or expertise quality of care projects
of leader but NOT • Attend first group
reflected in title before asking to
switch
EPIC Access
• All rising MS2 students should Trouble logging in?
continue to have EPIC access Korry Schwanz
kschwanz1@bsd.uchicago.edu
• If you don’t log in to EPIC Kate Blythe
kblythe@bsd.uchicago.edu
regularly, your account may be
soft-deleted
(so…log in)
Objective #3: The Paper
• Provide a framework for scientific writing
– Introduction
– Methods
– Results
– Discussion
• By international
consensus "Introduction
Methods Results and
Discussion" or IMRaD
Hengl, T. and Gould, M., 2002. Rules of thumb for writing research articles.
Introduction
• Opening line
– Start broad with something that interests
your audience “the hook”
– But not too broad
• “Sleep is a required biological function”
– Could frame it as a problem with scope
• “Sleep deprivation is a common problem
worldwide”
Introduction
• Routinely 2 to 3 paragraphs
– Think about the 3 main items that someone
needs to know to understand your aim
– Create topic sentences for each paragraph
carefully that introduce the next idea
• Need good ‘flow’
• Transition words and phrases between ideas
Transitions Words
Similar idea Opposite idea
• In addition • However
• Furthermore • Nevertheless
• Moreover • In contrast
• also • Regardless
• Likewise
• Similarly
• As a result
• For example Monitor frequency of use to avoid
overusing same word to start sentences
WHAT IS NOVEL????
Create tension or ‘gap’
• Given that other
studies have taken
place, why is your
study needed
• Highlight potential links
to therapy, policy,
scientific discovery
“To date, no study has explored…”
“Currently, it is unclear..”
Pitfalls of Introduction
• Too long
• Reference rehash or
overload
• Not making the case for
the study – WHY?
• Jargon or abbreviations
not explained
• Too broad
• Poor flow
Strategic References
• Avoid “reference rehash”
– “Chang et al showed X. Towle et al
demonstrated Y. Boone et al demonstrated
Z.”
– OK to do this for 1-2 landmark studies
• Goal is to synthesize prior work
– “Prior studies have showed…”
– “Some studies showed that X…. In contrast,
other studies showed Z.”
Aim and Hypothesis
• End of the introduction
• We hypothesize that…
– What is a hypothesis?
Characteristics of
a good hypothesis
Definition
Properties
“Educated” – grounded in literature
“Educated” guess review or anecdotal experience
• In general, 3 main
paragraphs
– Study Design
– Data Collection
– Data Analysis
Study Design…
including Setting & Population
• Design
– Retrospective or prospective?
– RCT, pre-post, observational?
• Give examples
– how a survey question was worded & scale used
• Past tense
– since it was done- not copied from IRB app or grant!
Data Analysis
• Calculations used to arrive at
the results
– Examples
• # of experiments you’ve done
• # of people you have enrolled (response rate)
Results
• Consider the “flow” – give most important
results first or “set up” the important ones
– Important results relate to your hypothesis
– Followed by “secondary” results that are less
important but interesting or characterize a
finding further
• Consider flow with your mentor
• Likely will continue to work on results rest
of summer (Upload a placeholder)
Project not working?
• It is OK if…
– Hypothesis is disproven
– p value is >0.05
– enrollment is low
– results are slow
• Disclosures:
– I teach it
– I am not a statistician
– But I am decent with basic commands and
regression
Figures/ Graphs / Tables
• Show the data the best you can
Requires validation of
IRB/IACUC
References
Hypothesis
Introduction