English

Writing Skills
Group 3
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 Members of
Group 3
Thu Hà Thu Hằng

Quỳnh
Giang
Phạm Vũ Hiền
Giang
 Contents of this template
-Show the organization of the paragraph.
-Answer these questions:
1. What do you like most about the paragraph?
2. What possession is the paragraph about?
3. What details does the writer provide to help you imagine how
the possession looks, feels, sounds, tastes, or smells?
4. What memories does the writer associate with the possession?
5. Why is the possession important to the writer?
6. Where does the paragraph need more details?
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I would say something about a special possession that I have, and
that is my smartphone. When I was a little girl, I always wished I
had a mobile phone that connected to the Internet. If I had it, I
could get more information. However, at that time, my family was
not well-to-do. Over the years, my parents suddenly gave me a
smartphone, when I turned sixteen. I was on nine clouds and filled
with such gratitude. It has a sleek design and is black, which
immediately attracted my eye when I first saw it. When I initially
started using it, it was such a wonderful experience because
everything worked quickly and without any hiccups. Thanks to
my phone, every day, it helps me get many news stories and a
huge amount of knowledge. Besides, it also keeps me in touch
with all my family and friends who live far from me. I absolutely
love this present that my parents gave me because, when I see it, it
 Table of Contents

The topic The supporting

01 sentence
02 sentence

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The concluding
sentence
a! The topic sentence
I would say something about a special possession that I have,
and that is my smartphone. When I was a little girl, I always
wished I had a mobile phone that connected to the Internet. If I
had it, I could get more information. However, at that time, my
family was not well-to-do. Over the years, my parents suddenly
gave me a smartphone, when I turned sixteen. I was on nine The
clouds and filled with such gratitude. It has a sleek design and is supporting
black, which immediately attracted my eye when I first saw it. sentences
When I initially started using it, it was such a wonderful
experience because everything worked quickly and without any
hiccups. Thanks to my phone, every day, it helps me get many
news stories and a huge amount of knowledge. Besides, it also
keeps me in touch with all my family and friends who live far
from me. I absolutely love this present that my parents gave me The concluding
 ANSWER
1
The thing I like most about the

2
The possession in the paragraph is
paragraph is that it follows the about
basic structure of a complete Giang’s smartphone which she
paragraph including the topic,

4
received
On her sixteenth birthday, the writer
supporting and concluding from parents on her sixteenth birthday
sentences. She introduces was given a smartphone by her
her special possession in the father
The possession is important to the writer

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first
because it brings back fond memories for
sentence , then gives a variety of
her. It is a valuable present that she was
information about it and gives
given by her parents, even when her
her feelings at the end
family is not well-to-do. Thanks to the
The detail is " it has a sleek design and is black, phone, she can learn more useful things.

3
which immediately attracted my eyes when u

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first saw it". When I initially started using it,
I think the paragraph is needed to add
it was such a wonderful experience because
information about the author`s feelings
everything worked quickly and without any
when she sees that present and explain
hiccups.
the reason why she absolutely loves it.
Thank you