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Writing The Report
REPORT
SENTENCE CONSTRUCTION
• Use of Adverbs
Examples of adverbs used in opening a sentence:
• Quickly, the victim attempted to flee but was held back by the suspect.
• Immediately, the suspect brandished a .45 caliber pistol and started firing
indiscriminately.
• Instinctively, SPO4 Bartolay went toward the suspect and grabbed his arm in an
attempt to disarm him.
• Slowly and cautiously, the snipers crept toward the location of the kidnappers.
OPENING SENTENCES
• Inverted Order
In the inverted order, the writer opens the sentence with the predicate first. In other
words, the verb comes first before the subject.
• Examples:
• Inverted Order: Recovered from the crime scene were five (5) shells of .45 caliber
pistol believed to have been used by the unidentified gunman.
• Natural Order: Five (5) shells of .45 caliber pistol believed to have been used by the
unidentified gunman were recovered from the crime scene.
OPENING SENTENCES
Examples:
To divert the attention of the suspect, Nilda Silva screamed at the top of her lungs
before pretending to collapse.
Use of Appositives
This is an explanatory noun placed in "apposition" or side-by-side relationship with
the subject or noun.
Police Senior Inspector Felix Carillo, the chief of police accommodated us.
(Underlined word is the appositive)
COMBINING SENTENCES
Combined sentence:
PO2 Walde boarded the patrol car and proceeded to the crime scene.
COMBINING SENTENCES
• The two examples are combined into a compound sentence using the coordinating
conjunction “but” preceded by a comma.
• Semicolon can also be used to connect ideas in lieu of a coordinating conjunction.
Example:
The investigator did not find any trace of forcible entry at the
main entrance. He proceeded to the back door for clues.
Combined:
The investigator did not find any trace of forcible entry at the
main entrance, so he proceeded to the back door for clues.
COMBINING SENTENCES
Example:
With semicolon:
The investigator did not find any trace of forcible entry at the main
entrance; he proceeded to the back door for clues.
• Another way to combine sentences is to change one of them into a subordinate clause to
create a complex sentence. This makes use of subordinating conjunctions such as:
• When
• Whenever
• Before
• After
• although
• Example:
COMBINING SENTENCES
• Example:
Mrs. Elsie Gao learned about the tragedy that befell her son. She
became hysterical.
Combined:
When Mrs. Elsie Gao learned about the tragedy that befell her
son, she became hysterical.
USING TRANSITIONAL WORDS OR PHRASES
• Time-Order Words
USING TRANSITIONAL WORDS OR PHRASES
Example:
The three students- Molino, Salama, and Torre, alighted from the jeepney and proceeded to
the Maharlika restaurant. They occupied a table near a window. After about five minutes, a
waitress approached them and took their order. Then, Torre left his seat to go to the men's room.
Shortly after closing the door of the men's room, he heard successive gunshots. Immediately, he
hid inside a cubicle, and waited until the commotion stopped. Thereafter, he slowly opened the
door of the men's room and slowly peeked through it. From his position, he saw a gun-wielding
man fleeing the restaurant. At the same time, he also saw bloodied bodies strewn on the floor
and slumped on tables.
USING TRANSITIONAL WORDS OR PHRASES
Spatial-Order Words
inside beneath
outside On one side
Above In front
behind beside
USING TRANSITIONAL WORDS OR PHRASES
Example:
The protesters at Plaza Rizal were assembled in a formation of three phalanxes. The
front line was composed of student leaders from the universities in Naga City. Behind
them are fraternity and sorority members bearing lighted candles and chanting "Justice for
James!" Alongside them were their teachers and fellow sympathizers. At the back and far
end of the assembly were security escorts aboard their motorcycles
USING TRANSITIONAL WORDS OR PHRASES
Comparison or Contrast
likewise nonetheless
In the same manner otherwise
however On the contrary
still In spite of
USING TRANSITIONAL WORDS OR PHRASES
Example:
Operatives of this station composed of SPO3 Rudy Armea, SPO2 Chris Bayola and
PO3 Rico Gaston proceeded to Tandang Sora Public Market to serve the Warrant of Arrest
of a certain "Burloy Acosta" who faces murder charges. However, after two hours of
diligent search, suspect was nowhere to be found. Nonetheless, the three police officers
decided to stay put for another hour as they were tipped off that the suspect was just in the
vicinity.
USING TRANSITIONAL WORDS OR PHRASES
thus so accordingly
Example:
The three identified suspects were investigated on the same evening by SPO3 Fidel
Felipe and PO3 Roel Alaoag during which they revealed having kidnapped and killed their
employer's son.
They also confessed to having thrown the body in a grassy field in Barangay Mapagong,
Calamba City. Immediately, police investigators, namely SPO3 Amorao, SPOl Bo and
other civilian agents, accompanied the suspects to Brgy. Mapagong where they found the
lifeless body of the victim. Consequently, the suspects were charged with kidnapping with
murder.
USING TRANSITIONAL WORDS OR PHRASES
Emphasis
indeed in fact even in other words especially
Example:
The fire victims, especially the smallest, who was believed to be a five-year old boy,
were charred beyond recognition.
USING TRANSITIONAL WORDS OR PHRASES
Addition
Addition
Example:
Besides a plastic bag containing three packs of cigarettes, and a piece of lighter
and crumpled foil paper, the police operatives also recovered from the suspects two pieces
of 9-inch fan knives with wooden handles. Furthermore, they discovered a tickler
containing names and addresses, including contact numbers.
USING TRANSITIONAL WORDS OR PHRASES
Examples
Example:
The victim was 5'2" in height, medium build and with fair complexion. In
particular, he bore a snake tattoo on his left chest and a mole on his forehead.
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