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CSEC Poems-
June 2023- January 2027
SUBJECT
POETRY
MATTER
How should
you Analyse Discover what is the poem
about/why?
An African Thunderstorm David Once Upon a Time Gabriel Little Boy Crying – Mervyn
Rubadiri Okara Morris
Appearance vs Reality,
Places, Experiences,
Discrimination, Prejudice, Experiences,Season-
Manliness,
Birdshooting Olive
Culture, Oppression, Gender Roles, Aspirations,
Nature, Senior
Economic Contrast, Identity, Childhood
Expectations, Poverty, Appreciation/Admiration (of
Imperialism, Contrast Nature), Peacefulness,
(Culture) Places, Experiences
CSEC POEMS AND THEMES
A Stone’s Throw – Elma Test Match Sabina Park Stewart My Parents – Stephen Spender
Mitchell Brown
Hypocrisy, Treatment of Women, Racial Pride, White Privilege, Parent-Child Relationships, Class
Extrajudicial Punishment, Sports, Contrast. Language and Disparity, Bullying, Oppression,
Religion and Gender, Insincere Culture Love of Parents, Fear, Freedom,
Morality, Violence, Abuse of Wishes, Forgiveness, Childhood
Power Experience
CSEC POEMS AND THEMES
Landscape Painter, Jaimaica- Dulce et Decorum Est Wilfred This is the Dark Time, My Love
Vivian Virtue Owen – Martin Carter
Ol’Higue – Mirror –
TONE
Frustrated
Morbid
How would you Regretful
describe the Reflective
language’s mood? Sentimental
Critical
-Select Phrases
showing Attitude Activity> Select Poems and
identify tone
POETIC DEVICES
Simile: Imagery:
“Like a plague of locusts, ” the “From the west
storm is coming with a Clouds come hurrying with the
destructive force
wind
“Like a madman chasing Turning sharply
nothing.” Show the chaotic
movement of the storm “…on their backs Dart about In
and out”.
“Like sinister dark wings;”
showing the harshness and “evil” “Clothes wave-like tattered flags
of the storm Flying off”
Once Upon A Time-Gabriel Okara
SIMILE REPETITION
Stanza 4, lines 20-21 emphasizes the constant changes in Repetition is evident at the beginning and the
the persona’s face. If you think of how often a woman end of the poem. This usually signals the
changes her dress, then that is how often the persona beginning of a fairy tale. Therefore, it is
adjusts his/her personality to suit an audience. The list of implied that the persona is nostalgic about the
faces that follow this line emphasizes this point. past.
Stanza 4, lines 23-24 compares people’s faces to smiles
in a portrait. If you think about a portrait, it is usually very
formal and stiff, even uncomfortable. Therefore, the
implication is that the smiles are actually fake and stiff.
They are conforming or trying to fit, into a preconceived
mould that is set up by societal expectations.
Stanza 6, lines 38-40 compares the persona’s laugh to a
snakes. When you think of a snake, words such as sneaky
and deceitful come to mind. Therefore, the implication is
that the persona is fake, just like the people he/she
despises.
Little Boy Crying – Mervyn Morris
Contrast Metaphor
Stanza 1 uses contrast to show (Easy tears can scald him with),
the changes in the little boy’s Irony (The little boy thinks his
body language before and after
father is unfeeling but here it is
the slap. For example, before
clear that he is struggles between
being slapped he was laughing
wanting to comfort his son and
but it changed to howling.
ensuring that he disciplines him.)
West Indies, U.S.A. Stewart Brown
ALLUSION SARCASM
Line 5: Dallas is an oil-rich state in America. Line 20: This statement means the exact
Therefore, many of its inhabitants are wealthy, opposite of what is stated. The persona is
and the state itself is wealthy. By stating that disgusted that Uncle Sam (America) would
San Juan is the Dallas of the West Indies, it have such a regulation. This regulation bars
implies that it is a wealthy island in the West anyone from stepping a toe on Puerto Rican
Indies. soil, if it is not your intended destination. You
just have to remain in the aircraft, no matter the
Lines 5-7: An allusion is being made to the waiting period, until it is time for takeoff. The
well-known cliche; ‘every cloud has a silver persona believes that the Americans are being
lining’. It means that behind everything that is blatantly discriminatory, and are attempting to
seemingly bad, there is good. In the context of camouflage it through the use of regulations.
this poem, it means that the good, the silver He does not believe that they have achieved
lining, has a mark, or stamp, that authenticates their goal of subtlety.
its good quality; it is hallmarked. This implies
that it will always have its silver lining Line 20: The statement, ‘give me your poor…’
showing. is particularly sarcastic because it is a direct
quote from the New Colossus, which rests on a
plaque on the statue of liberty, and signifies that
the disenfranchised of the world are welcome.
The persona, as a member of the
‘disenfranchised’ masses, clearly feels unwelcomed.
Sonnet Composed Upon Westminster Bridge –
William Wordsworth
SIMILE PERSONIFICATION
The persona compares the manner in Lines 9-10: The sun is referred to as
which the beauty of the morning settles a male who rises sharply and
over the city, to that of a garment on a beautifully. This emphasizes the
body. This emphasizes the perfection of beauty of the city in the morning.
the beauty of the morning, just as a
garment flows smoothly over a body. The use of this personification also
helps the reader to personalize this
beauty.
Line 12: Like the sun, the river is
personalized as well. This allows the
reader to see the river as real, instead
of a thing. It comes alive and we can
visualize its movement, gliding, as
beautiful.
BIRD SHOOTING SEASON-OLIVE SENIOR
Metaphor – Imagery-
Examples: “Men make marriages to Examples: “in darkness shouldering
their guns” not literal marriage but their packs, the guns they leave” we
shows the close, needed, and the can imagine the scene of the men
relation the men had with their guns cloaked in darkness with guns in
now that it is bird shooting season, hand and their sacks on their backs
you need your gun to shoot so the leaving in the night to go hunt.
gun was held in high importance. “We stand quietly on the doorstep
shivering” again another image
where we can picture the young
children standing feeling the cold air,
shivering as they watch the men
leave.
The Woman Speaks to the Man who has Employed Her Son
– Lorna Goodison
PERSONIFICATION OXYMORON
Lines 4, 6-7: The love interest’s eyes The term heart’s-treachery implies
constantly accuses and convicts the that the heart, something so vital and
persona. This device highlights the indicative of love, has committed a
extent to which the persona has hurt terrible crime. It highlights the
this person. heartbreak that the persona has
caused his love interest.
Lines 18-20: The persona hopes that
his country, his other dearest love,
will forgive him for the treasonous
act of loving another. This highlights
the patriotism that defines the
persona’s relationship to his country.
A Lesson for this Sunday- Derek Walcott
CONTRAST IRONY
Lines 13-15: These lines show that One would think that men with
the men who were ‘holding stones’ ‘virtuous’ hands would have only
believe they are more morally pure thoughts, but these men intend
upright than the other men with to stone the woman , who seems
whom the woman associates. utterly defenseless. Also, images of
cruelty are used, such as ‘bruised’,
‘kisses of stone’, ‘battery’ and ‘frigid
rape’.
Test Match Sabina Park- Stewart Brown
Simile : Metaphor:
“Who threw words like stones” the “the salt coarse pointing of those
words the boys use where harsh and boys” salt is rough and salt in
hurt when they would say them. wounds sting. The pointing by the
boys would point and it would hurt
emotionally for spencer.
“muscles like iron” they boys were
strong and Spence may have not
been strong enough to fight them off Allusion:
so to him they were much stronger
than him and it would hurt to be hit “While I looked the other way” an
by them. allusion to Jesus turning the other
cheek as a form of forgiveness, like
Spencer wanting to forgive the boys.
Landscape Painter, Jaimaica- Vivian Virtue
Imagery: Personification :
“On corner of the Twisted “ the mountains pose for him”
climbing mountain track” “The little Hills fidgeting”
“dips, darts, now here, now there” “sprawl grandchildren about the
“…Puzzles of pigment bloom in knees”
the pallets wild small garden”
Metaphor :
“ tireless hummingbird, his
brush”
Dulce et Decorum Est- Wilfred Owen
SIMILE ALLITERATION
Stanza 1, line 1: This simile introduces the
exhaustion of the soldiers. Stanza 1, line 7: This device points to
the level of fatigue that the soldiers
Stanza 1, line 2: This emphasizes not were undergoing.
only the tiredness of the soldiers but
the fact that they might be sick as well. Stanza 1, lines 7-9: This highlights not
only the fatigue that the soldiers were
Stanza 2, line 19: This device gives a feeling but the fact that they were
visual image of how the soldier injured as well.
physically reacted to the gas.
Floundering implies flopping about, Stanza 4, lines 29-30: This device
therefore, the soldier was flopping highlights a visually graphic death
about violently. We know it was violent mask. The soldier is in the throes of
because fire and lime illicit impending death.
excruciating pain.
This is the Dark Time, My Love – Martin Carter
Metaphor: Personification :
“Now I am a lake”-
“In me she has drowned a young girl,”-
the woman, she has been looking at the “I am silver and exact. I have no
mirror since she was a young woman now preconceptions.” – the mirror is
personified throughout the poem as it is
her youth has passed and she is now old the narrator it now gives itself more
“I think it is part of my heart”- the mirror human qualities and referring to itself as a
being.
has been reflecting the wall for so long is
has become a standard part of its Imagery:
existence as it always there “It is pink, with speckles.”- the
description of the wall allowing us to
imagine the wall
“But it flickers.
South –Kamau Brathwaite
ALLITERATION PERSONIFICATION
•Stanza 1, lines 1-2: The sound that the •Stanza 1, lines 6-7: This device gives a
alliteration elicits, when spoken, is a beautiful impression of the effect that the
positive one. This is the case because island had on the persona. He felt whole
the alliteration forces the reader to when he was there, at peace.
sound cheerful, thereby facilitating the
interpretation that the persona is happy
to be home. •Stanza 2, lines 16-17: The shadows, in
this context, represents his past life and
•Stanza 1, lines 4-5: This alliteration, experiences on the island. The memories
again, draws the reader through the of his island elicits feelings of sadness,
sound that it elicits. One can almost even homesickness. These memories cast
hear the sound that the sea makes an oppressive shadow over his life in the
through the repetition of the ‘s’ sound. north.
It emphasizes the joy that the persona
feels to be home.
Death be Not Proud-John Donne
Metaphor Personification
There are three metaphors in this Donne has personified death
poem. The first is used in the opening throughout the poem, stating it
line “Death, be not proud.” Here should not be proud. Being proud is a
death is compared to a proud man. human quality. Hence, death is given
a human quality of having feelings
The second is used in the ninth line,
and emotions
“Thou art slave to fate.”
In the last line in an extended
metaphor where death is compared to
the non-existent or unrealistic object.
Dreaming Black Boy-James Berry
ALLUSION: REPETITION:
Stanza 1, lines 6 and 7, alludes to slavery, the The constant repetition of the phrase ‘I
state of lacking control over one’s own life and wish’ points to a yearning, a desperation
destiny. The fact that reference is made to this
hints to how the persona feels about his life. He even, for the basic things that life has to
does not feel as if he has control over it. offer. The repetition gives credence to the
idea that the persona might believe that
Stanza 3, lines 19 to 20, alludes to Paul his wishes are actually dreams that might
Robeson, a black intellectual, who attained not come true.
success despite difficult circumstances. The
persona yearns to be like this person. He wants
room to stretch intellectually.
Stanza 4, lines 22 to 25, alludes to the klu klux
klan. Burning lights refers to the burning of
crosses and the pyjamas alludes to their white
outfits that look like pyjamas. The persona
wants them to leave him alone, find something
else to do other than make his life difficult by
contributing to his wishes remaining in the
realm of the dreams.
Formal
Informal
TONE Solemn
Melancholic
How would you
Frustrated
describe the
language’s mood? Morbid
Regretful
Reflective
-Select Phrases
Sentimental
showing Attitude
Critical
How many stanzas/how long are
they?
Are there any line breaks/caesural
FORM pauses?
What do the pauses signify?
Why is the structure of the Is there a lot of punctuation or
poem? just a few?
Is there any rhyme? Why? Is it
consistent?
Study Stanzas/Rhyme/Rhythm/
How does the rhyme affects the
Punctuation poem’s meaning?
Does this style of poem have a
specific name?
FEELING What does the tone say about the
narrator’s feelings?
What might be the poet’s
What emotions are intentions?
being conveyed? Who was it targeted at?
Is it from the poet’s prospective
or someone else’s?
- Note the different How does it make you feel?
feelings
Approach to Answering CSEC
Poetry Comparative Essays
-There MUST BE A
Conclusion Concluding PARAGRAPH
Approach to Answering CSEC Poetry
Comparative Essays
GROUP ACTIVITY>
From the prescribe list of poems that you have studied, chose TWO that explore the
nature of Prejudice.
Write an Essay in which you describe the situation in which Prejudice is
demonstrated in Each poem. You must compare the response to the Prejudice that is
demonstrated and discuss an effective device use by EACH to highlight the impact
of Prejudice on the speaker or a character in the poem.
Total 35 marks