•Coherence in writing means achieving a consistent
relationship among parts. •Cohesive devices show the logical relationships between the various parts of an essay as well as between sentences and paragraphs. What are they? • cohesive devices are like bridges between parts of your paper. • They are cues that help the reader to interpret ideas in the way that you, as a writer, want them to understand. What do they do? • cohesive devices help you carry over a thought from one sentence to another, from one idea to another, or from one paragraph to another with words or phrases. • cohesive devices link your sentences and paragraphs together smoothly so that there are no abrupt jumps or breaks between ideas. Why do you use them? • cohesive words and phrases are used to link sentences and paragraphs, to show which direction your thought patterns are going, to help the reader accurately follow your train of thought. • They signal the relationships among the various parts of your subject. Types of Cohesive Devices : • REPETITION • SYNONYMS • PRONOUNS • TRANSITIONAL DEVICES • CONJUNCTIONS • ADVERBS REPETITION • This helps to focus your idea and to keep your reader on track. EXAMPLE: Most people find contemporary art difficult to understand. Contemporary art is purposely abstract, leaving the viewers wondering what they are looking at. EXAMPLE: • There are couples who dislike one another furiously for several hours at a time; there are couples who dislike one another permanently; and there are couples who never dislike one another; but these last are people who are incapabable of disliking of anybody. EXAMPLE: • There are couples who dislike one another furiously for several hours at a time; there are couples who dislike one another permanently; and there are couples who never dislike one another; but these last are people who are incapabable of disliking of anybody. EXAMPLE • Bullying is not good as it affects emotional and psychological behavior of an individual. Most victims of bullying experience physical, emotional and mental health issues. EXAMPLE • Bullying is not good as it affects emotional and psychological behavior of an individual. Most victims of bullying experience physical, emotional and mental health issues. SYNONYM • Synonyms are words that have essentially the same meaning, and they provide some variety of word choices, helping the reader to stay focused on the idea being discussed. EXAMPLE At the end of the run, he was suddenly afraid. The height of the tree terrified him. EXAMPLE • Myth narrate sacred histories and explain sacred origins. These traditional narratives are, in short, a set of beliefs that are a very real force in the lives of people who tell them. EXAMPLE • Myth narrate sacred histories and explain sacred origins. These traditional narratives are, in short, a set of beliefs that are a very real force in the lives of people who tell them. EXAMPLE • Being overweight is a serious issue in today’s society. Indeed, obesity is on the rise around the globe, particularly in the developing world. Having an excessive amount of body fat increases the chance of cardiovascular health issues and decreases life expectancy. EXAMPLE • Being overweight is a serious issue in today’s society. Indeed, obesity is on the rise around the globe, particularly in the developing world. Having an excessive amount of body fat increases the chance of cardiovascular health issues and decreases life expectancy. PRONOUNS/DETERMINERS • This, that, these, those, he, she, it, they, and we are useful pronouns for referring to something previously mentioned. Be sure, however, that what you are referring to is clear. EXAMPLE: Mr. Novel Fraga is the CEO of Fraga Fisheries and Company. He became the CEO in 2018. EXAMPLE • When scientific experiments do not work out as expected, they are often considered failures until some other scientist tries them again. Those that work out better the second time around are the ones that promise the most rewards. EXAMPLE • When scientific experiments do not work out as expected, they are often considered failures until some other scientist tries them again. Those that work out better the second time around are the ones that promise the most rewards. EXAMPLE • Althea said that she didn’t know Mr. Jose. She denied knowing him. EXAMPLE • Althea said that she didn’t know Mr. Jose. She denied knowing him. TRANSITIONAL DEVICES • These are words which give cues to the readers on the relationships between sentences, joining sentences together. EXAMPLE: Would you like bread or cookies with your coffee? EXAMPLE • I like autumn, and yet autumn is a sad time of the year, too. The leaves turn bright shades of red and the weather is mild, but I can’t help thinking ahead to the winter and the ice storms that will be surely blow through here. In addition, that will be the season of chapped faces, too many layers of clothes to put on, and days when I’ll have to shovel heaps of snow from my car’s windshield. EXAMPLE • I like autumn, and yet autumn is a sad time of the year, too. The leaves turn bright shades of red and the weather is mild, but I can’t help thinking ahead to the winter and the ice storms that will be surely blow through here. In addition, that will be the season of chapped faces, too many layers of clothes to put on, and days when I’ll have to shovel heaps of snow from my car’s windshield. EXAMPLE • He is still young, yet he is already very responsible. EXAMPLE • He is still young, yet he is already very responsible. CONJUNCTIONS • are words or groups of words that are used to connect other words or phrases in a sentence. • are key to good cohesion • and, but, or, on the other hand are helpful for connecting information that is similar, yet with an important difference, so that you can make a point about it. EXAMPLE • I’d like to eat out, but on the other hand, I should be trying to save my allowance. EXAMPLE • I’d like to eat out, but on the other hand, I should be trying to save my allowance. THREE TYPES OF CONJUNCTIONS • COORDINATING CONJUNCTIONS • SUBORDINATING CONJUNCTIONS • CORRELATIVE CONJUNCTION COORDINATING CONJUNCTIONS • These conjunctions connect words, phrases, and clauses of equal value. Clauses or equal value are called independent clauses and can stand on their own as separate sentence. EXAMPLE • Would you like bread or cookies with your coffee? EXAMPLE • Would you like bread or cookies with your coffee? OTHER EXAMPLES: • F • A • N • B • O • Y • S OTHER EXAMPLES: • FOR • AND • NOR • BUT • OR • YET • SO SUBORDINATING CONJUNCTIONS • The clause beginning with the subordinating conjunction is always the subordinate clause, which depends on the main clause and cannot exist without it. EXAMPLE • The baby cries whenever he feels hungry. EXAMPLE • The baby cries whenever he feels hungry. OTHER EXAMPLES before, after, unless, if even, although, even until/till, when, if, in case, though, whereas as soon as, providing whenever while CORRELATIVE CONJUNCTIONS • pairs of conjunctions which are used to join equal sentence elements together. EXAMPLE • She is both intelligent and beautiful. EXAMPLE • She is both intelligent and beautiful. EXAMPLE • I will either go for a hike or stay home and watch TV. EXAMPLE • I will either go for a hike or stay home and watch TV. EXAMPLE • Jerry is neither rich nor famous. EXAMPLE • Jerry is neither rich nor famous. EXAMPLE • He is not only intelligent, but also very funny. EXAMPLE • He is not only intelligent, but also very funny. OTHER EXAMPLES either...or neither… nor not only… but also both… and whether… or so… as ADVERBS • These are words that join independent clauses into one sentence. A conjunctive adverb helps you create a shorter sentence. When you use a conjunctive adverb, put a semicolon (;) before it and comma (,) after it Example • It rained hard; moreover, lightning flashed and thunder boomed. Example • It rained hard; moreover, lightning flashed and thunder boomed.