Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Vinschool Times City Oct4 Session 1 TT
Vinschool Times City Oct4 Session 1 TT
• No Red flags
• Spark an opening
• Nail the conclusion
• Character building
• Technical building
Profile Redflags
• Begin with a surprise/thriller/mystery and leave the audience wanting to know more. Avoid simple
starts. Begins with:
• Paint a vivid image of space-time continuum from far->close
• Or paint the inner world of a person from inside-out
• Or paint a philosophy from principle to details (often a quote or excerpt)
• Continue with concepts that are relevant to your keyword/statement
• Sample model:
• Outside picture -> Inside perspective -> Outside anchor -> Inside concept
• Inside feeling -> Outside perspective -> Anchor
Opening
• Conclusion:
• Expand each argument from simple to more
multiple/complex
• Redress each counter argument (if any—and shoud)
• Linkage and lesson
• Make a strong claim to your college/major choice only
if it’s authentic
Character
• Physical description
• “Graciously tall and slender”
• Clear behavior
• “Jessica emerges eloquently in the dining hall from the
woods’ shadows.”
• Trigger
• Jessica whispers “My dad married another woman. He
wanted a son.”
Character
• Establishing Voice
• Establishing Thoughtfulness
• Showcasing Good Writing
Voice
Aspect
• Unrealistic Choice
composition of activities or essay
Tone
content Positive/Negative
Setting Space (locations)/Time (weather, age)
Making excuses
•Action (admitting without not giving
Task/Outcome
solution) Formal/Informal
Style
• Inconsistent
Word Choice career/academic
Academic interest
(abstract)/Professional (functional)
Pace Momentum (one window)/Process (multiple windows)
• Overqualified
Side Majority/Minority
Your Character Generalist/Specialist/Conservative/Liberal
Tone