I'm ritin my first story and i'm hopin 2 get it published sum day so please give me sum constructive criticism. I cnt rite all the time cos its cumin nearer to the middle of the year and there will...view moreI'm ritin my first story and i'm hopin 2 get it published sum day so please give me sum constructive criticism. I cnt rite all the time cos its cumin nearer to the middle of the year and there will b alot of things goin on 4 meview less